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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-03-07 01:38 PM


Sweet Memories

Sweet,

The song ~

Replete,

The longing ~

But the sing,

The sing

Brings

The

Memories

And if you heard
What you heard
On the breeze

You would say
‘Sigh away,
Quiet ease’

For in your oneness
You have found
Yourself

In your closeness
You take you from
The shelf

And inspect
For damage
Done

‘Tho a bit nicked,
You shall carry
On

In the wind
Comes again
A life

On the breeze
Comes one who
Pleases you

Sing a song
All along
He shall hear

And in the night
In candlelight
You draw near

Don’t shed the tear
He is there
For you

Don’t let go
He’s there, you know
For you

In his arms
Lay his charms
For you

In secret dreams
He only dreams
Of you…

So Sweet

The song ~

Replete,

The longing ~

But the song sings

The singing

Brings

The

Memories



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bslicker
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1 posted 2001-03-07 01:43 PM


Oh yes memories, and a song.
I really like your writing.




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2 posted 2001-03-07 01:53 PM


Lady love, this is splendid work really fabulous writing, I really love this absolutely excellent
Take care love as always
Puck


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-03-07 04:04 PM


Lady in White-
A sweet-flowing piece...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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ethome
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4 posted 2001-03-12 01:47 PM


Wonderful musical writing......singing memories bring it back so clear...very much enjoyed!
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