Open Poetry #12 |
Unsilenced |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Unsilenced Supressed are the words, once voiced of love all thoughts of truth kept in hold. Behind me lie visions waiting in sheets, rainbowed soft hues in unfold. Lips press together in wait of new touch, a soft caressing of skin. Wasting not, a moment of time of suspended impulses within. I meet in the silence, in shadows of time. and rise to it's passionate calls. Drowned in the intimate details of mind through the Niagra of dreams, where love falls. A kiss is a kiss but released unto lips that scald with a burning of fire, will steam away seal of the thoughts held on lips and release once again their desire. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh wow! I'm speechless.....You have such a talent! "One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Powerfull...emotional...all those lips! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wynter, Great write. Words, to touch, to thoughts, to lips. Amazing what a kiss could bring. Bernie Bernie Slicker (aka also: justsomeofme) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooooh...wynter! Looks like it may be time to turn to spryng! Loved this one---you wrote of a kiss that shouts. Wonderful! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! This is fantabulous! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dreamkeeper don't know about the talent, but the feelings are always there, thank you huggzzz J lips are nice aren't they Bernie thank you, a kiss is almost as wonderful as a touch Serenity well "A kiss Is Not Just A Kiss" to me Interloper glad you liked *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now, this is sensual stuff! The Niagra of dreams, where love falls...oh I like that! this one flows nicely and passionately Wynter! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you E ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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