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Whispers In The Dark
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Whispers In The Dark |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Whispers in the dark Fingers soft against my skin Pillow fight begins |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
So soft and sensual...and then bam! You got me with a big surprise. I didn't even see it coming! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Oh, feathers ! I LOVE IT ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Let your imagination begin. I love your senryus. Melton |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Pillow fight?!? This is cute. Which isn't where I thought it was going. Ha! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is another pleasant thought..thank you, Paula Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
VAS...lol thats the point...that first hit is the most important...thanks Marge...teeheehee...gotcha...this was fun 2dalimit...thank you sweet thing...ya ready to go the limit? JLR...LOL...but whyever not? It just seemed the perfect conclusion to me...hey girl? WHAP!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula does this mean I have to wait til after the pillow fight to get my kiss...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yep...ya got me too!! Very cute, Paula!!  sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Excellent ice breaker Can't wait for the next verse  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kathleen...I missed you the first time...thanks James...who says you have to wait? Stealing kisses in the middle of the fight is half the fun. sp...teehee...its sooooooooooo much fun Rex...you sir are awful...to challenge me like that...next verse indeed...HHHHHMMMMM.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey what's this from whispers to a pillow fight...he he...I could just imagine it.....good write Paula! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Vandana...thank you ethome...lol sweet poet...you read Whispers II first silly...I like pillow fights dont you? |
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