Open Poetry #12 |
Ambrosia of the Night... |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Ensconced in glow of hunter's moon, ...Orion guards the night, While Seven Sisters, tapers high, ...dark welkin sky ignite, Polaris stands in silent watch, ...o'er garden of the gods, As Milky Way in endless bloom, ...lights heaven's promenades, Comets course from 'yon to ever, ...past Southern Cross quiescent, Man gazes up in wond'rous awe, ...upon the night, transcendent, Flowing stars in endless stream, ...diaphonous ephods, Mere mortals drink of heaven's splendor, ...sweet nectar of the gods. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mike~ Once again your words sing like a wonderous dream, pulling the reader into the the most beautiful visions...thank you for the light that you weave into the verses...thank you for sharing your gift with such grace and style~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mike, I have to agree with Miss Butterfly on this amazing writing here, simply breath-taking, you are gifted,, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Just too, too lovely ! I love your paint of the night ! Ambrosia, indeed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Butterfly... *smile* thanks so much for the special reply... take care... Cerenity... appreciate your reading and responding... danke... glad you liked Marge... thank you kind and gracious lady for the wonderful reply... may the moon shine down upon you tonight... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply breathtaking, Mike! Absolutely beautiful!! More!! More!! More!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Mike, This was awesome. The imagery is superb. I can see it all right before me. Very well done!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Mike-Lovely painting. Enjoyed the read PM |
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