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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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0 posted 2001-03-06 11:17 AM

Linger in my heart…
A welcome visitor
And I shall process thoughts
Of our last meeting

Did you realize
Your touch warmed me?

Or that your words
Disarmed me?

That you left me
A little undone

Before you left
In light of sun

And now you linger here
Your name on my lips
Still feeling that sweet touch
Of lightest fingertips

Still warm
Disarmed
Undone

Still yours

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-03-06 11:24 AM

I LOVE this!!! Beautiful.....

SEA

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-03-06 12:28 PM

Me too, I love this *s
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

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state of mind

3 posted 2001-03-06 01:10 PM

this is great, have the same feelings, about someone i know also.

bernie

Bernie Slicker

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Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

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Wilmington, Delaware

4 posted 2001-03-06 01:53 PM

"Did you realize
Your touch warmed me?
Or that your words
Disarmed me?
That you left me
A little undone
Before you left
In light of sun
And now you linger here
Your name on my lips
Still feeling that sweet touch
Of lightest fingertips
Still warm
Disarmed
Undone
Still yours"

All I need to read - all I need to treasure
this has to be one of the most beautiful
poems - speaking the unspeakable

a treasure = an unmatched treasure

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-03-06 02:56 PM

And now you linger here
Your name on my lips
Still feeling that sweet touch
Of lightest fingertips

Still warm
Disarmed
Undone

Still yours

===============
ahhh yes Lady ....
tis the linger and disarm that makes it worth the wait....
you have whispered it poetically well..
(and me thinks Wil REALLY like it)

LOL
great writing

Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2001-03-06 02:57 PM

Have to echo Bernie here too...I know this feeling well.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-03-06 03:03 PM

what a great ending!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Marsha

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Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2001-03-06 03:06 PM

Lady dear heart this is truly utterly superb, this is one of those poems that is an absolute treasure. Do you realise how breathtaking this is.
Absolutely first class
Take care love as always
Puck

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2001-03-06 05:48 PM

This brings thoughts I like having lingering on my mind. *S* Well done!

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

10 posted 2001-03-06 05:49 PM

You are all very, very kind with your responses, thank you so very much...

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