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Living Without |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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When quiet tries to steal away my heart and opens doors much better left untouched I feel again this painful time apart and question why it still must hurt so much. I find myself seek chaos to forget yet yearn for that so peaceful solitude and days of dreams and loving him well met before he so abruptly changed his mood. He comes to me at times I least expect invades the hidden corners of my soul such moments cause my heart to yet suspect that holding him was all that made me whole. Tomorrow will remain a mystery though life would show me happiness untrue my memories contained in history and hope a promise I cannot eschew. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we can live without a lot of things Sandra. . . but not hope. . . there will always be hope. . . wonderful poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Catalinamoon, this is beautiful...yet so sad. You have opened your heart in this piece so vividly that I can feel your pain. However, don't ever think: 'that holding him was all that made me whole' ...as all who read this can see, you are very much a whole person by yourself. Others add to who we are by lending to us pieces of themselves, but when they leave we keep the bit of ourselves they left us with. You are you by yourself, don't ever forget that!!! Much love and hugs to you, keep that chin up  ~Becky~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Your name on a post here - is a sure magnet to my reading - Once again I'm not disappointed - This is a positive jewel!!! I've shared such thought - many times - beautifully penned |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written sandra...if i could i would ship him UPS to ya hon  ..HUGS..~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lot of truth here Cat...trick is to listen to what our heart says...even when it's in argument mode... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, You're too beautiful to go on "living without". I loved this.... Much love, Elise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely penned. Wonderfully expressed, enjoy your poetry. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, I agree with Mike, You write well and I will look for more of your work. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"He comes to me at times I least expect invades the hidden corners of my soul such moments cause my heart to yet suspect that holding him was all that made me whole." very nicely written sandra..i enjoyed this read very much.. hugs, g "a love declared for days to come, is as good as none" -tracy chapman |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Enjoyed this a lot ... it's very well written ... and all I can say is just follow your heart and don't be giving up hope |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sandra..... I'm glad that I didn't miss this poem full of your grace, beauty, and very tender heart. Seeking chaos is a defense that we all use to help us forget the pain. I wish for you an easier way to find a new love, my friend, and I wish for you much happiness when you do!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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