Open Poetry #12 |
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Sacrificing the Future |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Ehh.. I haven't written much poetry for a while, so I appologize if it isn't written very well.. I know I would have liked to see better, but couldn't figure out how. Through our eyes we see many differences. And it is through these differences that we let our lives flow past. Through these differences, we split our friendships apart. All the time we could spend together, time shifts us apart. And now we open up a quarrel between our present and our past we only sacrifice our future, through the bitterness that lasts. Never fully forgiven, never fully trusted, we finally realize we may never see eye to eye. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Personally I don't see what you are worried about. I thought this one was great. You have penned alot of thought and emotion and done it VERY poetically. Well done. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think you penned a wonderful message...well done!... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Love is believing in what you can not see Knowing that your paths came together as fate Being able to pick up the phone just to talk No matter the time, no matter how late' Yes, this is so true! We do seem to waste our time focusing on the differences among us instead of enjoying them! Excellent write! sp ![]() I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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