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As The Day Go By
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As The Day Go By |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
As the day go by, I will be still thinking of you, As the day go by, I still can't heart beat, I keep missing one of those moments, I used to spent days with you, I still In live In the memory of love, As the days go by slowly, I will be making wishes upon the stars, I will be taking these pericous moments As a memory , I won't forget you, As the days go by, I will be keep thinking of you, As the day go by, Every minute I count, Everyday go by, I count , I count how long will I be alone Without you, How long will I be without you? As each day go by, I count the hour, So that I can be with you, As day go by, [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A minute can seem an eternity when you are missing someone. You've brought that across in this very well, vandana! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written Vandana. I liked your poem. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Vandana Wonderful write. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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