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to ride love’s rainbow
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to ride love’s rainbow |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Over the mountains lies Paradise... A place where a true love should be... The path to it starts up at Heaven’s edge, where we’ll ride a rainbow for free... Adventure awaits us, as we climb aboard... We’re ready to touch stars above... The heavens caress us with fingers of light... We’re wrapped in a rainbow of love... The warm winds are guiding, they’re leading us on... Our rainbow is picking up speed... We fly past the mountains that stood in our way, and now we see where love can lead... In flashes of color, we finally touch down... Our haven waits there, just beyond... Where all of our dreams manifest into view, and burst into welcoming song... Surrounded by promise, our hearts bloom once more... A rainbow remains by our side... To fill us with colors of life, and of love... ...Together... ...Forever... ...To ride... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - if I could only find that rainbow, if only. A beautiful writing, only as you can do. BC |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Beautifuly written reminds me of the feelings of just falling in love. Kerri |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill.... Thank you, and I have a feeling your new rainbow is looking for you, too!!  Hi Kerri.... Yes, I was hoping that feeling would come across, because that's what rainbows do to our hearts.......make them feel alive, happy, and like new lovers should feel!! Thank you!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Taffetta Junior Member
since 2001-02-26
Posts 27 |
Sunny Oh to travel that rainbow and find a pot of gold or - a love that is true with many memories. Thank you for sharing it and I enjoyed the ride. Taffetta |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very beautiful piece...loved the presentation too! Nathan |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunny, You've painted a beautiful picture here makes you want to go find a rainbow, thank you enjoyed so much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny: This is absolutely beautiful: "Over the mountains lies Paradise... A place where a true love should be... The path to it starts up at Heaven’s edge, where we’ll ride a rainbow for free" Thank you for letting us in on your secret. Ariana |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Taffetta.... Anyone else would say go for the gold, but I have always thought that true love is worth much more......so may you find it at the end or your rainbow! Thank you, my friend!! Hi Nathan... Thank you so much! And I'm glad I could bring a bit of color to you today!! Hi Cerenity... Oh, thank you, and you don't have to look far to find your own rainbow....it's usually right under your nose!!!! Hi Ariana... Any time I can share one of life's little secrets, I will be happy to!! Thank you so much for coming by to enjoy, and it is good seeing you!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is the rainbow over the ocean, I can see it, too. Beautifully done. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
In flashes of color, we finally touch down... Our haven waits there, just beyond... Where all of our dreams manifest into view, and burst into welcoming song... Surrounded by promise, our hearts bloom once more... A rainbow remains by our side... To fill us with colors of life, and of love... ...Together... ...Forever... ...To ride... bright and beautiful *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Sunnyone, A beautifully written piece. I like the way you write. Red  |
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