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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-03-04 12:30 PM



My Storm

Clouding in my mind
obscures my thoughts

fantasy and reality
fact and fiction
are blurred in the fog

trying to decipher
actuality, illusion
becoming more difficult

as the skies darken
around my storm
the roaring clap of thunder
drowns out the sound of

as if he could have loved me…

Annie



May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-03-04 01:22 PM


Annie....
This is so real in thought and feeling...seems like storms and love can often feel the same. I loved reading this, I love a good storm, and thank you!!


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




Sven
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2 posted 2001-03-04 02:00 PM


the storm still rages. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
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on the horizon of a fairytale
3 posted 2001-03-04 11:32 PM


thank you both for the kind remarks.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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