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rottyguy
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since 2001-03-04
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0 posted 2001-03-04 07:04 AM



c'mere u

how odd a medium to coalesce
a chance encounter while weightlessness
bemusing time with just our minds
entwined our lives, our apparition's blind.

c'mere u

our wayward dances through this space
the lines of custom we've erased
intoxicating chatter's bliss
but alas the physical, i confess to miss.

c'mere u

ur touch, ur smell, ur slight of way
engulfs my thoughts betwixt the day
and to these scenes of you i keep
in dreams revived, my forlorn sleep.

c'mere u

but soon my love we will have met
in due short time our rings complete
a time befitting in season's spring
when love for two reborns again.

c'mere u

© Copyright 2001 matthew nguyen - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-03-04 07:08 AM


Welcome to Passions...your poetry seems familiar....have you posted elsewhere before? I will enjoy reading more of your writing!


rottyguy
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since 2001-03-04
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2 posted 2001-03-04 07:43 AM


crossed post to critical, but first time poetry poster on the internet. appologies (for the xpost) as i am new here and trying to get my sea legs.

dusting off the cob webs as i haven't done any poetry since highschool many many moons ago.

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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3 posted 2001-03-04 08:57 AM


I Liked this poem...reminded me of my current situation. I met my man on the internet and it has been heaven ever since *sighs* (We currently live together with the happiness of our future to share)
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