i rose this morning to watch the sun set

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Open Poetry #12

i rose this morning to watch the sun set

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

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0 posted 2001-03-03 11:09 PM

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-03 11:25 PM

Mike~ I am completely confused on this one......

I know, easy for me.....I know I'm missing a point here.......I'll re-read and see if I can catch it.......if not.....I apologize now.....

it feels like being left out of something or being the last to know something....I bet I'm way off, but hey, I usually am

SEA

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

2 posted 2001-03-04 12:57 PM

I'm also confused by this dark piece piece but, did you forget to die or something....ha, ha, I'm just kidding but this piece is very abstract and well-written and you seem to have a warped mind when you write but nonetheless, these are good characteristics to have....a brilliant write!

Nathan

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2001-03-04 02:18 AM

Hi, guys. Don't worry: this IS very abstract and dark (and funny). I was listening a lot to the Smiths this weekend while I was sick, and I guess Morrissey's abstract, dark humor rubbed off on me for a poem. Just wanted to try somethin' different.

Mike

Brad
Member Ascendant

since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

4 posted 2001-03-04 12:58 PM

I cannot in good conscience believe in this.

[This message has been edited by Brad (edited 03-04-2001).]

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