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poertyman2002
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 32
Florida, US

0 posted 2001-03-03 12:18 PM


We live together for all our lives,
But never know it.
You use it all the time and in most cases would be unhappy without it.
Altho you may not know what it is,
I do not blame you much,
For I just realized what it was about a weeka go.
This thing that is with you is your heart and remebering it is there is important.
For thine is the kingdom and power of glory with or without it.
You should use it, but be careful for:
Hearts are fragile, if you mess with them they can easily break.

© Copyright 2001 Brian Gold - All Rights Reserved
ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
1 posted 2001-03-03 01:15 PM


How true

The heart, most important, resilent and yet fragile part of our existence.

rememeber always to keep it true.

Well done

AT

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2001-03-03 03:05 PM


And just how did you come to this realization? I have often been accused of wearing my heart on my sleeve...but I'd rather love and be hurt than lock my heart away to wither and die in the darkness...so what if I take chances????? Loving someone is worth the pain...telling them...well I dont want to wake up tomorrow regretting never having said I love you just because I was afraid ya know?
poertyman2002
Junior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 32
Florida, US
3 posted 2001-03-03 04:47 PM


I am not saying not to tell people to love. I am just saiying to be careful and not to mess with hearts. And Im sorry, but wearing your heart on you rsleeve doesnt register in my vocab.
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