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| Open Poetry #12 |
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The Shadows Of My Dreams (Phrases challenge?) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Like Kethry I combined the phrases together, although I think she did a much better job than I did.  The Shadows Of My Dreams Within this tender flame that burns here in me My soul rises and glories in the dreams mystery To bathe in the light that are in my dreams alone With their images as insubstantial as the sea foam Whispers in the dark speak their secrets to me There in my dreams I have no identities or memory In that smoky misty world where shadows dance Where life is all possibilities I can take a chance In the shadows of my dreams I can see your eyes They ignite my soul with fire and my heart flies Mystic moons guide my way through loves maze In this my house of passage I wander in a daze Trying to hold on to my soul while letting go I feel my soul move to you I follow dreams flow To be enraptured like this, I’m enchanted by you Held in thrall to you, held by my dreams so true I am a rose held in the shadows of my dark night The sigh of a breeze that is blest by angels flight If forever lasts for a day then night is my eternity And held there in my dreams I’ll lie contentedly Angels sing the songs that I hold inside my heart There in the mists where my dreams of you start I’ll whisper to you as you come in my dreamtime Love come and enrapture me for ever I am thine Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BRAVO!! Marsha.........I LOVE this! So beautifully done!!  SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I wouldn't sell myself short there Mushy....this is a beautiful write! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Tender loving caresses here, Marsha. Ah, you mushy so sweetly! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
very nice work... dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, Mushy, you did this so well. I am so proud of you! *HuGS* Now sister Moon is envious of the light you shed. Write On in song Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Marsha, where is this 'phrases' challenge? I went back 60 days at the Poetry Workshop site and found nothing. Virginia |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you so very muchly everyone, I'm only just getting back to say thank you now the last few days have been very hectic Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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