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Open Poetry #12

Stardust Mood

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-03 12:11 PM

Star Dust Mood
~*~
Shivers pull romantic strings of blue hearts
as fire in midnight stars become glazed eyes
seeking the calm moonlight
that becomes you

BloomingRose

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

1 posted 2001-03-03 12:23 PM

Stardust rarely rains here. I feel unqualified to answer your words.

Although you packed them tightly, with much to hear and know.

Well said.
AT

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-03-03 12:40 PM

Just too pretty.......

SEA

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2001-03-03 09:54 AM

My friend......you have penned a real beauty in this and of course it shines wonderfully. Knowing that you love music so much, I do believe that you will enjoy a song titled "Shiver" sung by Jamie O'Neal (she also sings "There Is No Arizona". Check it out. I think you will find that your words would add so wonderfully to her song. Loved the read and always love the way you are able to share so much in so few words.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-03-03 11:42 AM

I like it so much right from the shivers of love to the calm moonlight that becomes you. Well done Rose! Such beauty in so few words that paint a picture to savour and enjoy.... take care Ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-03-05 12:59 PM

Like the descriptions in this. Beautiful write.

PM

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-03-05 04:54 PM

Very beautifully said in so few words, Deb! Wonderful write!

sp

do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

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