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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-03-02 04:16 AM


An Angels Kiss

I want lots of chocolate kisses
upon my lips.
That's what I miss.
Her chocolate kiss.
How could you possibly understand?
You never felt her chocolate kiss
lingering on your lips.
You never made my heart pump so fast
right in the middle of an angel kiss
or made me beg for more in moments
of sensual bliss.
You never felt her breathe
angel life into you
just moments before she broke
your heart in two.
Of course I miss my angels kiss.
Was not that long ago she and I were
sharing the finest chocolate kisses.
That's what I miss.
I want lots of chocolate kisses
upon my lips.

Jameslee@March01,2001
ILoveChocolateKisses


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-03-02 05:56 AM


okay...so no, I don't understand about "her" chocolate kisses..but yes...I think I understand...smile..I seem to recall a caramel tongue... sigh...lots of broken hearts going around...hugs.
Kethry
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2 posted 2001-03-02 06:17 AM


Chocolate Kisses Yum!
write on
Kethry


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3 posted 2001-03-02 09:06 AM


James......no, I guess I wouldn't know about her kisses either..... but you seem quite taken with them! Remember, don't beg for what you deserve........... SEA
Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2001-03-02 09:52 AM


Well, I haven't been much for chocolate in my life but maybe I should investigate it further and try to acquire a taste for it if it can spawn such beautiful words as these. A very wonderful read sir. I did so enjoy it and am still in awe of how you make a longing love sound so lovely. I bow to you.
walker
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5 posted 2001-03-02 02:14 PM


Absolutely beautiful and romantic.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-03-02 02:30 PM


Serenity I would like to hear more about this caramel tongue.
Kethry yes they are delicious when I get them.
Sea I only refer to beg in the finest sense. Beg as in "yes, yes, I desire more of those chocolate kisses." Not begging for something I don't deserve.
Mark it is true that Michelle is lovely and sweet and I desire a billion of her chocolate kisses. Certain lips affect me this way and she has those lips.
Walker yes she is!!

Nate Dogg
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7 posted 2001-03-02 03:00 PM


Mmmm, chocolate a sweet and wonderful poem, Jimmy....thanks for sharing it!

Nathan

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8 posted 2001-03-02 04:14 PM


Some how I am getting the message you want chocolate kisses.
A sweet poem with a twist of humor.
Good!
*S*


mYsTiC


[This message has been edited by mystic requiem (edited 03-02-2001).]

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9 posted 2001-03-02 06:44 PM


Mmm gotta go and get some chocolate now. Interesting read tho, some kisses just stay in your mind.

The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world.


Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 2001-03-03 06:42 AM


You have woven such tender memories into the
fine silk of this piece...those are memories
that will stay with you a lifetime...we can
only hope the pain fades and only the
happiness remains....excellent writing~

Paula Finn
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missouri
11 posted 2001-03-06 02:24 AM


AH James...these are the very best kisses...hugs darlin
Irish Rose
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12 posted 2001-03-06 07:01 AM


This would have made an excellent Valentine message. Gosh, it feels good to read something like this and even better to be alive and well to read it!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2001-03-06 07:59 AM


somtimes lips do that to you hmmmm...made me think back...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



ethome
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14 posted 2001-03-06 08:57 AM


Sounds delicious! Chocolate kisses...umm umm!! you poor guy you mean you're not getting them right now.....you write about them so well..I'm sure you'll get lots of them in time...and you know I'm wondering what Serenity means by a carmel tongue too! She's definitely hiding something isn't she? I enjoyed the write very much!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2001-03-06 04:20 PM


Thank you Nate, Mystic, Moon Dust, Paula, Wynter and etome.
Mystic I desire those chocolate kisses more than anything in the world.
ethome unfortunately no...I still hold some hope and desire..
Don't know if anyone watched the movie "Chocolat" but the advertisment in the newspaper shows Johnny Depp and Juliette Binoche enjoying a chocolate kiss...
James

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