Open Poetry #12 |
An Angels Kiss |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
An Angels Kiss I want lots of chocolate kisses upon my lips. That's what I miss. Her chocolate kiss. How could you possibly understand? You never felt her chocolate kiss lingering on your lips. You never made my heart pump so fast right in the middle of an angel kiss or made me beg for more in moments of sensual bliss. You never felt her breathe angel life into you just moments before she broke your heart in two. Of course I miss my angels kiss. Was not that long ago she and I were sharing the finest chocolate kisses. That's what I miss. I want lots of chocolate kisses upon my lips. Jameslee@March01,2001 ILoveChocolateKisses |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
okay...so no, I don't understand about "her" chocolate kisses..but yes...I think I understand...smile..I seem to recall a caramel tongue... sigh...lots of broken hearts going around...hugs. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Chocolate Kisses Yum! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James......no, I guess I wouldn't know about her kisses either..... but you seem quite taken with them! Remember, don't beg for what you deserve........... SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, I haven't been much for chocolate in my life but maybe I should investigate it further and try to acquire a taste for it if it can spawn such beautiful words as these. A very wonderful read sir. I did so enjoy it and am still in awe of how you make a longing love sound so lovely. I bow to you. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Absolutely beautiful and romantic. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Serenity I would like to hear more about this caramel tongue. Kethry yes they are delicious when I get them. Sea I only refer to beg in the finest sense. Beg as in "yes, yes, I desire more of those chocolate kisses." Not begging for something I don't deserve. Mark it is true that Michelle is lovely and sweet and I desire a billion of her chocolate kisses. Certain lips affect me this way and she has those lips. Walker yes she is!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Mmmm, chocolate a sweet and wonderful poem, Jimmy....thanks for sharing it! Nathan |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Some how I am getting the message you want chocolate kisses. A sweet poem with a twist of humor. Good! *S* mYsTiC [This message has been edited by mystic requiem (edited 03-02-2001).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Mmm gotta go and get some chocolate now. Interesting read tho, some kisses just stay in your mind. The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You have woven such tender memories into the fine silk of this piece...those are memories that will stay with you a lifetime...we can only hope the pain fades and only the happiness remains....excellent writing~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AH James...these are the very best kisses...hugs darlin |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This would have made an excellent Valentine message. Gosh, it feels good to read something like this and even better to be alive and well to read it! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
somtimes lips do that to you hmmmm...made me think back... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sounds delicious! Chocolate kisses...umm umm!! you poor guy you mean you're not getting them right now.....you write about them so well..I'm sure you'll get lots of them in time...and you know I'm wondering what Serenity means by a carmel tongue too! She's definitely hiding something isn't she? I enjoyed the write very much! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Nate, Mystic, Moon Dust, Paula, Wynter and etome. Mystic I desire those chocolate kisses more than anything in the world. ethome unfortunately no...I still hold some hope and desire.. Don't know if anyone watched the movie "Chocolat" but the advertisment in the newspaper shows Johnny Depp and Juliette Binoche enjoying a chocolate kiss... James |
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