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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-03-01 03:17 PM


Rainbow Dreams

There’s a place I can get to and its not far away
A magical place where soft dreams holds sway
The sun always shines and it’s never ever too hot
And the plants that I grow spring from their pot
The clouds are small and fluffy never ever grey
There’s are no rain clouds to mar the golden day
Peace and contentment fill my soul with bliss
And the wonder of the place is held in your kiss

There’s a place I could live in for times eternity
A place filled with magic and wondrous mystery
It’s painted with rainbows coloured in dreams hue
And the children of the rainbow are never blue
The songs of angels fill the azure skies in delight
And winged unicorns give aerial displays in flight
Wonder and awe fill my heart stunning my eyes
And the majesty of this place is held in your sighs

There’s a place I flee to whenever I need its peace
A place of sanctuary where all my troubles cease
It’s there within my reach whenever I have to go
My world of dreams like a river it seems to flow
I get there across the Rainbow Bridge of my dreams
To enter a land where nothing is as it might seem
Life is a dream and the world is full of loves beauty
And the joy of this place is held in your mystery
Marsha




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
OLIAS
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1 posted 2001-03-01 04:34 PM


A wonderland of love, revealed in your words, thank you for allowing me to part of your vision for an instant. Wonderful work.

Regards,
Olias.

Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada
2 posted 2001-03-01 07:22 PM


A paradise you've weaved into my mind...beautiful...

Poeminister

"There is no remedy for love but to love more."
--Henry David Thoreau


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Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-03-01 08:08 PM


Marsha~
'across the Rainbow Bridge of my dreams'

What a lovely thought !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2001-03-02 06:41 PM


Hi Marsha,

What a wonderful picture you painted in this beauty, very dreamy, I loved it.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2001-03-02 11:40 PM


marsha-

wow this is so beautiful! loved the images in this...so captivating
and mystical--really lovely...as always you pen your heart and might
i add quite wonderfully at that!

take care
love ya
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


SEA
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with you
6 posted 2001-03-02 11:43 PM


oh Mushy.....you know I love this..... it's wonderful! SEA
Nate Dogg
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7 posted 2001-03-03 12:31 PM


What a wonderful place that you've described...I share your vision too....very nice write!

Nathan

DreamLess
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since 2001-02-28
Posts 92

8 posted 2001-03-03 01:01 AM


u have nice images their ,it took me to a nice corner there in my mind

WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
9 posted 2001-03-03 02:10 AM


Marsha,
you have surpassed yourself...and me. I love this one, especially the rainbow bridge and the flying unicorns phrases!
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



the romantic fanatic
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Spokane, WA U.S.A.
10 posted 2001-03-03 05:15 AM


Absolutely beautiful! I love what you've done here. I am eager to read more of your work. Cheers!
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
11 posted 2001-03-03 11:49 AM


What a fantastic trip into the fantasyland of love................great!! Mushy you're such a fantastic romantic sometimes!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Marsha
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Maidstone Kent England
12 posted 2001-03-03 02:51 PM


OLIAS thank you so very very much, I do appreciate it I truly do

Take care love
Mushy

Poeminister love, I thank you kindly I certainly appreciate that you have taken the time to leave this message here for me
Take care, love
Mushy

Margie girl, dear heart, thank you so very muchly, you know how much I appreciate you don’t you? Good

Take care love as always
Mushy

Cerenity love how utterly wonderful of you thank you so very muchly, you are too kind, and I love you for it
Take care, love as always
Mushy


Amy darling girl, always you support me dear heart and I thank you love, always and forever. Thank you sweetie,
Take care, love as always
Mushy


Circe love, you too support me, when I’m down you make me smile, and you have such a gift for writing, thank you always love.
Take care, love as always
Mushy


Nathan love thank you always, your reply is much appreciated, I always enjoy seeing your name on my posts
Take care, love
Mushy


Kethry dear heart, so do I say thank you to you love? No I don’t think I shall just because dear heart, just because! Besides I’d be here till next Tuesday and I haven’t got the time. I have a date! (Shock horror!) Don’t get too excited love, it’s only dinner. (One of my girlfriends set it up, a blind date! I’ll be home before the clock strikes twelve) I’ll tell you all tomorrow
Take care love as always
Slushy


trf thank you so very muchly I do appreciate it truly I do
Take care, love
Mushy


PT dear heart, I know the eternal optimist that’s me love. Thank you dear heart, you know how much I appreciate you don’t you? Yes well, I think I might have mentioned it once or twice.
Take care, love as always
Mushy



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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