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Muse, Music & Colors ...................... 08.25.99 repost
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Muse, Music & Colors ...................... 08.25.99 repost |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Muse, Music and Colors In the wee early hours between two and three, my Muse came a’tiptoeing into my dream. She brought with her Music and Colors by name and began to play a very unusual game. “Good morrow” spoke Muse, uncapping her wand, “I’m here to show you things from the great beyond.” In detail then appeared in my dream’s misty haze a scene from which I couldn’t unlock my gaze. Without further word Muse beckoned, and the dancing began, Red and Orange erupted into a wild and colorful can-can, Yellow then swirled and spun in to Music’s delight, joined Amber and became a most beautiful sight. Lavender began a-twirling, and lacy Cream gave a glance as Black and White swayed together, locked in a lover’s dance. Pink strolled the ballroom floor, looking lovely and fine, Gray came promptly along and paired up with Wine. Soon Purple and Gold waltzed to a slow Ballad’s tune, Greens and Blues twirled to a lovely, mystical rune, then slowly Music became soulful, softly fading away all of the colors coming together in one massive sway. Luminescence filled the ballroom’s parquet floor Iridescent colors all pleading “Please, one dance more!” Twilight’s shadow now looking for Morning’s first ray all colors coming to a slow halt before the new day. The couplets became quadruplets, Music fades to quiet, as they all began to stroll back into the late night, Music still lingered sweetly on in my dream As Sun stood waiting for Moon’s last silvery beam. This story it seems, shall never really end for someone’s Muse shall pick up that Muse’s pen and will then take Music and Colors by name and begin this wonderful Dance all over again. 25 August, 1999 ©KRJ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I like the pictures this evokes in my head.... Very Good... music.. colors..dream land... Thank You ~~~Connie~~~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, this is magical, truly a vision that is utterly ace. Thank you so much for reposting this, because this is a wonder that I truly didn't want to miss. Utterly gorgeous and i love it Take care love as always Puck  Fabulous it really does deserve a standing ovation love. BRAVI BRAVI BRAVISSIMI  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 03-01-2001).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--a very captivating poem...love the graphics too. I'm glad you reposted, for I didn't see it the first time. |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
wow, this is cool Emily |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine--I love this. The imagery is very vibrant and charming. Excellent writing. Poeminister "life is the Childhood of our immortality" --Goethe |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I feel like dancing now very nice  The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
then slowly Music became soulful, softly fading away all of the colors coming together in one massive sway. Luminescence filled the ballroom’s parquet floor Iridescent colors all pleading “Please, one dance more!” Twilight’s shadow now looking for Morning’s first ray all colors coming to a slow halt before the new day. The couplets became quadruplets, Music fades to quiet, as they all began to stroll back into the late night, Music still lingered sweetly on in my dream As Sun stood waiting for Moon’s last silvery beam. ================= MOST IMPRESSIVE muse my dear... most impressive moment of inspire very cool write Sun... superb imagery very glad i got to see this beauty Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You knew I'd LOVE it ! I do - I do - I do ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at all my friends who love their muse, and their music...thank you! |
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