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Lady Ollyne
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0 posted 2001-02-28 11:15 AM



My Love

Thou has charmed mine heart.
Never wouldst I have believed
that one could mean so much
that only his thoughts rest
in mine, at all times.
They play the scenes over
and over, until mine eyes open
seeing before them, shadows
dancing, spinning together
each held tightly, never to let go
of one another.

Dreams within a dream, dost I see
Hoping beyond hope, for touch of thee
To soon arrest these worried thoughts
Wishing for thy return, to mine heart be caught.
Always in love, left here, I shall be

in shadows dancing...
Lady Ollyne



"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-28 11:19 AM


...dreams within dreams...

lovely

Sven
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2 posted 2001-02-28 12:30 PM


*bowing*

Poet Fair, I was hoping that thou wouldst take part in this challenge. . . and thou hast not let this Knight down. . .

A work truly deserving of thy name. . .

Until we meet again Poet Fair. . .

*bowing*

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Lady Ollyne
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3 posted 2001-02-28 01:46 PM


Lady Of Light
    
       It appears that within dreams
       Mine heart views the Knight
       The one in mine eyes
       'Til in real, to delight.

       Lady Ollyne

  

     Sir Sven, Dear Knight
      
        A challenge disposed of
        accidental, by chance
        But thine eyes made it special
        with your meeting by glance
        This Lady doest hope
        that some future day,
        together will bring us,
        words shared in this way.

        Most Thankfully,
        Lady Ollyne

    


"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare


[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 02-28-2001).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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4 posted 2001-02-28 08:59 PM


My Lady - wouldst thou so write like this for me, I would be so charmed. Beautiful writing.

BC

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind
5 posted 2001-02-28 09:03 PM


Thank you for writing this.
Good job!


~*Peachy Be*~

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