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A Purple Moon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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A purple moon shining tonight in an aquamarine sky a hazy lazy pale moonlight flirting stars blink shyly by Beautiful as the fourth of July a romantic umbrella unfolds sweet as lemon merinque pie twinkling with lilacs and golds Your arms around me as i hold this special moment in time this purple moon i behold flaunting its umbrella sublime A purple moon reflecting our love touching souls with its lavender glove < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Beautifully romantic, Victoria! I sure loved that lemon meringue pie and lavender glove lines, those are brilliant, the whole poem was marvelous! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Noah..sweet of you to peek in today..happy you enjoyed..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ Victoria It's such a lovely purple moon a'hanging in the sky tonight - gives a very special glow-to a love so bright Shining there for all to see - but shared by two in special memory-way up high in aquamarine sky shine on purple ~moon~ *This was lovely, and I thank you for the inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful words...very romantic. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister< !signature--> "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Marge..for that lovely poetic response..loved it HUGS.. thank you so much Poeminister..nice to hear from you today.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* you just know how to get me don't you Victoria?? This was wonderful. . . mention purple, and that's all I need to know. . .-------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you sven..i did not know you liked purple..i love it too...good to hear from you i should of wrote the ghazals in purple haa..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Victoria! Denise |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria, your poems are always so colorful and delicious. Love this. Sandra |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Victoria~ This is devine, beauty abounds in this purple moon piece great write~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Sandra, Denise and Tracie..HUGS TO ALL.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah yes, ~V~.... with this one, you sealed your fate and acquired a dedicated fan, not to mention a friend always!! Delightful!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A purple moon and lemon merange pie...who could ask for anything more...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautifully written, Vicky...I loved your rhyme scheme...hmmm, I may wanna borrow it..ha,ha, I'm just kidding....brilliant piece! Nathan |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sunny...well of course hon..always and forever..such lovely comments from you.. HUGS James...purple and lemon..come to think of it that sounds kind of yucky haa..thanks so much james..for peeking in. nate..hey nate..its a spenserian sonnet..its not mine ..you can have it anytime you wish ha..glad you like.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
so dreamily written..  great work hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you G..almost missed this one..i caught it in my email..ha..glad you enjoyed HUGS~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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