Open Poetry #12 |
Raspberry Tea......( for Janet) |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet Marie takes her tea ………..most raspberrily Steeped in thought With a twist of rhyme…….a poetess in quiet time Gifting our blue pages With love and knowledge….……….transcending ages Heart pure and magic true Raspberry passion with wistful hue Music in words…….with ease and flow Butterfly kisses…….will let you know Stay a while……………………..…have some raspberry tea Get to know our beloved Janet Marie ~SEA~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I liked the poem, even though raspberries are not high on my favorites list. This is so sweet, though...and what a way to describe Janet! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"most raspberrily"... You've captured her. Beautiful tribute! Poeminister |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
"Music in words…….with ease and flow Butterfly kisses…….will let you know" Enjoyed this one, thanks! AP |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A beautiful poem for a beautiful lady... Passion's light is dimmed when she's away. *S* Great job, SEA! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, I, too like 'raspberrily.' What a cute word! And a very nice write, SEA! I'm sure she will appreciate this! sp everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
mmmmmmmmmmm. . . this was excellent. . . More please. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sea- you are always such a sweetie... but this was just so cute! wonderful write, and i know janet will smile when she reads this. you have captured her essence well. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sea-girlie... this is very sweet and gave me a(much needed) big old smile today ... thank you for this sweet surprise you know I love the (...) and that you know me so well. and hey...I just discovered a new treat... Raspberry Pop-tarts LOL.... sheer heaven I tell ya thanks for making my day my sweet friend...(again) and thanks to the others for the kind replies to this....... I am on a bit of break from Passions right now... taking care of some personal matters at home. so please excuse my absence in the forums. I will be in here reading when I can but for a while I may not be doing my usual amount of replies. I will get back and caught up when I can. thanks and love to all in poetry land jm Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
HEY!!!!!!!!!! I know her!! Does that make me semi-famous just because I know what brand, how she takes her tea, and even which cup she uses while sipping under her blanket throw? Wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady and I am proud to say......my dearest friend. Hugs to you for being so sweet and giving her this well deserved back rub. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Oh, no, not you too! Everyone got the RECIPE except me! I better get it this summer, because I've heard it is a life saver. Great poem for a great lady. Hugs, ME |
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