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SEA
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0 posted 2001-02-27 04:39 PM



Janet Marie takes her tea
………..most raspberrily
Steeped in thought
With a twist of rhyme…….a poetess in quiet time

Gifting our blue pages
With love and knowledge….……….transcending ages
Heart pure and magic true
Raspberry passion with wistful hue

Music in words…….with ease and flow
Butterfly kisses…….will let you know
Stay a while……………………..…have some raspberry tea
Get to know our beloved Janet Marie


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-27 04:41 PM


I liked the poem, even though raspberries are not high on my favorites list. This is so sweet, though...and what a way to describe Janet!
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2 posted 2001-02-27 04:44 PM


"most raspberrily"...

You've captured her. Beautiful tribute!

Poeminister

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3 posted 2001-02-27 05:39 PM


"Music in words…….with ease and flow
Butterfly kisses…….will let you know"

Enjoyed this one, thanks! AP

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4 posted 2001-02-27 05:45 PM


A beautiful poem for a beautiful lady... Passion's light is dimmed when she's away. *S* Great job, SEA!
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5 posted 2001-02-27 06:45 PM


Yes, I, too like 'raspberrily.' What a cute word! And a very nice write, SEA! I'm sure she will appreciate this!

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every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

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6 posted 2001-02-27 06:49 PM


mmmmmmmmmmm. . . this was excellent. . .

More please. . .

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7 posted 2001-02-27 07:48 PM


sea-

you are always such a sweetie...
but this was just so cute! wonderful
write, and i know janet will smile
when she reads this. you have captured
her essence well.

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


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8 posted 2001-02-27 10:12 PM


Sea-girlie...
this is very sweet and gave me a(much needed) big old smile today ...
thank you for this sweet surprise
you know I love the (...)
and that you know me so well.
and hey...I just discovered a new treat...
Raspberry Pop-tarts LOL....
sheer heaven I tell ya

thanks for making my day my sweet friend...(again)
and thanks to the others for the kind replies to this.......

I am on a bit of break from Passions right now...
taking care of some personal matters at home.
so please excuse my absence in the forums.
I will be in here reading when I can but for a while I may not be doing my usual amount of replies.
I will get back and caught up when I can.
thanks and love to all in poetry land
jm

Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2001-03-03 04:55 PM


HEY!!!!!!!!!! I know her!! Does that make me semi-famous just because I know what brand, how she takes her tea, and even which cup she uses while sipping under her blanket throw? Wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady and I am proud to say......my dearest friend. Hugs to you for being so sweet and giving her this well deserved back rub.
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10 posted 2001-03-03 08:46 PM


Oh, no, not you too! Everyone got the RECIPE except me! I better get it this summer, because I've heard it is a life saver. Great poem for a great lady.
Hugs, ME

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