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RobertB
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0 posted 2001-02-27 12:53 PM



Contradiction

Universal forces
in a tug of war
by gravitational pulling
pushing thoughts in orbit
around the synapses
making sense
of chaos
when words pool collectively
planetarially revolving
around the heart
as I see the contradictions
in you…..
feeling them in me
drawing us together
in alliance forever.


Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-02-27 01:04 PM


aaahhhhhhhh.....
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-02-27 01:17 PM


Beautiful...
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-02-27 02:17 PM


yes indeed, this is worth a double-read....
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4 posted 2001-02-27 02:25 PM


I didn't get it until I read the last lines, nicely done

~FKA Maria Byrne~


Paula Finn
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5 posted 2001-02-27 02:32 PM


I like the imagery of this one...planets and stars revolving like thoughts in your mind...
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2001-02-27 03:06 PM


Oh wow, feel the magnitude of this poem!
Deb

Corinne
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7 posted 2001-02-27 03:17 PM


The push and pull of life! Your poems just keep evolving!

Corinne

Denise
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8 posted 2001-02-27 06:52 PM


Excellent expression, Robert!!! So nice to see you again!!!
Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2001-02-27 06:59 PM


This is like a pleasant little stream flowing along, making the heart sing
Thank you
Liz

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10 posted 2001-02-27 08:57 PM


Oh yes..I do love this!
Very beautiful and the ending is my favorite.

NC
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11 posted 2001-02-27 11:01 PM


Robert, the images in this are excellent
can't wait to read more of your stuff!

RobertB
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12 posted 2001-02-28 07:06 PM


I thank all of you for your positive replies. Not that negative ones are bad.... it just is that I am in the mood for positive right now!!!

Winter has enough negativity for me now.

Robert

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