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Contradiction |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Contradiction Universal forces in a tug of war by gravitational pulling pushing thoughts in orbit around the synapses making sense of chaos when words pool collectively planetarially revolving around the heart as I see the contradictions in you….. feeling them in me drawing us together in alliance forever. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
aaahhhhhhhh..... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes indeed, this is worth a double-read.... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I didn't get it until I read the last lines, nicely done  ~FKA Maria Byrne~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I like the imagery of this one...planets and stars revolving like thoughts in your mind... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh wow, feel the magnitude of this poem! Deb |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
The push and pull of life! Your poems just keep evolving! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent expression, Robert!!! So nice to see you again!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is like a pleasant little stream flowing along, making the heart sing Thank you Liz |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Oh yes..I do love this!  Very beautiful and the ending is my favorite. |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
Robert, the images in this are excellent can't wait to read more of your stuff! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I thank all of you for your positive replies. Not that negative ones are bad.... it just is that I am in the mood for positive right now!!! Winter has enough negativity for me now. Robert |
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