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Fever...cinquain
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Fever...cinquain |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Fever the pain is too great inside eating away my strength heating me to a boiling liquid ~W [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-27-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Intense.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes!..........intense!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this...i can feel it. Poeminister |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I like short poems that say it all....like this one. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
yes I liked it too Richard |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This say it all---and very well. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sunshine E Poeminister RobertB maxtec1 JLR A intense as this seems, that's how intense it feels. Thank you all for your comments ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-27-2001).] |
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