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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-02-27 10:33 AM



Fever


the pain
is too great inside
eating away my strength
heating me to a boiling
liquid


~W



[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-27-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-02-27 11:20 AM


Intense....

ethome
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2 posted 2001-02-27 11:40 AM


Yes!..........intense!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-02-27 11:41 AM


I like this...i can feel it.

Poeminister

RobertB
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4 posted 2001-02-27 01:04 PM


I like short poems that say it all....like this one.
maxtec1
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5 posted 2001-02-27 01:10 PM


yes I liked it too
Richard

JLR
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6 posted 2001-02-27 01:30 PM


This say it all---and very well.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2001-02-27 05:40 PM





Sunshine
E
Poeminister
RobertB
maxtec1
JLR

A intense as this seems, that's how intense it feels.
Thank you all for your comments

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-27-2001).]

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