Open Poetry #12 |
A Canvas of Words |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Canvas of Words Each time I write, I fly a flight, Into shameless of a kind. Each time I face a canvas white It’s a challenge to my mind. My bristles brush the brash of day Trying to force a kinship. I rage within the interplay Just to link a fellowship Confront the dragons in his lair Face their rage, known and unknown. Daring fire bluster and flare Well into the blacker zone. Oft they play among daffodils Offering me bland fantasy. Other times its bile and peril Snorting fear and agony. But write I must, it spills the brim, It’s more then wile, more a whim. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, here is hoping it spills the brim in a constant flow. Wonderful write sir and please continue to enchant us with your words and fulfill that whim. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, this was just brim-ful of magic. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy...I wish I had the talent of your artistry...for I know the push and pull of my demons.... |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Some poems are fun to read and and a pleasure to pick at....little colorful snips here and there can add so much flavor and you've done it. Kinda like picking at a pizza with all the toppings. Thanks for a nice read "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yep, I understand that spill over the brim. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Nice comment, thank you. Kethry, Cute comment, thank you. Sunshine, You have plenty of talent. *L* Packratmike, Amusing comment, thanks Vas, Thanks allot. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I look forward to every flight, Seymour... for you never fail to fill the canvas with perfection. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Wonderful comment, thank you. *L* |
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