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My Goddess Calls. - Poet De Vine's challenge
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My Goddess Calls. - Poet De Vine's challenge |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Sorry, I only had time for one poem so I included all the phrases. I am a wanton, winsome sprite My goddess calls and I comply Whispers in the dark of night With wild abandon now I fly In the moonlight shadows dancing Glistening gleaming shadows prancing This is my house of passage here In shadows call of sure delight Goddess path trod by the lone seer The holy one who seeks in flight Mystic moons guide my way onward In memories my presence forward Identity has not my name Lost in the shadows of my dreams Within this tender loving flame The rose of rapture casts its beams In the moonlight goddess dancing With wanton sprite in joyful prancing Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 02-26-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Must admit? I love the credit? and ADORE the poem...is like you wrote a celebration of SELF...FANTASTIC WORK HERE KETH... but alas...must humbly admit? I offered no challenge. But very lovely of you to even think so...thank you with warm hugs....and? the sun is coming up here...so? off to the crypt I creep...damn those missing ray bans...mutter mutter groan and ?  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Whoops sorry sen, it was PDV. I'll change the title and script. glad you enjoyed it anyway. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marvelous!!! You did a great job.  |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I applaud!!!!!!! You did fantastic with this!  "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful. Very well done. Poeminister |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Kethry this is beautiful, you have done a great job my friend with this amazing piece. excellent as always. Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone, but as you can see from the challenge the words are mostly someone else's I just strung them together. be real and feel Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
string away...this is most enjoyable... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Lady, I sure do appreciate your words of kindness. Be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry dear heart, what was the challenge? And it obviously wasn't hard enough. I'll find something hard really hard! Love it dear heart, okay I know you can do Paradella do do don'ts and senryu and hakiu thingies, any combination of rhyme, sonnets and songs. I know you do prose, do me a Limerick, and no rude ones, or an epitaph. No both, Keth, make it a limerick epitaph! Limerick There once was a girl from Devon Who said I'll not get to heaven I might have just made it though But my behaviour has been a bit blue The vicar was truly shocked I hear When I said that I'm not good I fear He asked me why I thought this I said I enjoyed more than a kiss He said well that's not too bad Ahh I replied but not when I've had The verger and the choir of seven That naughty young lady from Devon Right you Missy get working before I get the whips out. Take care love as always Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha If I can string together a few phrases and call it poetry what makes you think I'd be afraid to write epitaph limericks although dear hear I believe you may have mixed your metaphors. tis done, I was supposed to be working >  Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry dear heart It was supposed to be hard not so easy you could do it in your sleep! Oh! right I'll have another think. And this is beauty love, but that is neither here nor there, work she says! Huh! work, I'm the one that mutters around here, you! Now let me think hard! And while I'm thinking just do some more Sister Moon poems! Love it dear heart as always Take care Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you Marsha, This challenge was phrases given to Poet De Vine, in the challenge forum. She used one phrase one poem, but I'm much too lazy for that so I added them all into one poem. yes the limerick was easy, I did it in my sleep. HuGS Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful beautiful beautiful you guys are simply amazing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You tied the package of these phrases together quite well and presented us with a very wonderful read of yours. I do so enjoy the unique quality of your talent and your capability of conquering challenges with such a flair. Beautiful read this morning in this one. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Nothing more that I can add...I agree with all the replies, this is simply amazing! I think it's much more difficult to write a poem including ALL the challenge lines! Great job! Debbie |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone, To describe this would be like threading beads, it was more a matter of choosing the right phrase (Color) and then placing it with complimentary phrases (different coloured beads) and tying it together with a theme (srting) once the trheme was done the rest was easy. And if you read it fast enough it almost makes sense *SMiLeS* be well, forthtell Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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