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shadows dancing (challenge phrase)
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shadows dancing (challenge phrase) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Now she is upon the wane, I pray I'll never feel the same then in full-- a dance of tulle- echoed tides of ocean's pull... and now again, she's on the wax the cycle of the hard cold facts. In the moonlight, shadows dancing, breezes whisper, trees enchanting with the rattle of their leaves a beat of heart left unappeased becoming rattle ring of death-- how odd that breeze can steal my breath. " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh whoa....took the phrase and gave it praise! Serenity....thank you for the addition to my library! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, shadows dance away into sunlight when you write. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You may be a Member Ascendent, but you have arrived as a poet!! Wonderfully done!  |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Great!!! it is a superb poem! A pleasure to read! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Serenity- Challenge wonderfully met. Very nicely done. Poeminister |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Oh YES! I do love this one. A well met challenge if I may say so!  |
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