Open Poetry #12 |
Why The Willow Weeps |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I looked out the window and happened to see, A dog cock his leg by my willow tree, At wetting the tree he was quite adept, And that is why the willow wept. The bee is such a busy soul He has no time for birth control, That is why in times like these, There are so many "Son's of Bees" |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok..so I expected lyrical and got satirical!!! LOL Cute sir! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You have it all wrong. The tree only was weeping cause it saw you peeking and knew it not to be long before Toerag was out leaking. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
My dear Toe.......you crack me up....... SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, it's about darned time you showed up ! ! And one can easily see, you've G R O A N in your poetic efforts ! Good to see ya', Toe ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, Toerag, I can't begin to top the other comments so I won't try. I thoroughly enjoyed the read though, a bit of Ogden Nash in your groan. He's one of my favorite 'silly/serious' poets! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hey Toerag, So nice to see you and I knew I was going to get a good chuckle,,, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your mind should have its own program on the discovery channel! Too funny! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Thanks to all the responses....yall are so kind... |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was great! I LOVED it! ~Susie Many people hear voices when no one is there. Some of them are called mad and are shut up in rooms where they stare at walls all day. Others are calle |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Liked this |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... just what I needed ... a great big grin, thank you for the smiles Toerag, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hey, Toe Up to your toes in outdoor woes? Nice to sees ya. Cor |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Toe, nice to see this is up to you normal standard....half mast. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Weeping Willow The willow weeps for you, my friend It’s graceful limbs in sorrow bend And from the dainty teardrop leaves A weeping whisper in the breeze The willow sways it’s arms around That gently brush the summer ground And as you sit and ponder there It’s requiem drifts through the air For weeping is the willow’s part To comfort your unsettled heart Whenever love has set you free Come sit beside the willow tree It whispers sighs the seasons through Today it’s weeping just for you You inspire me, dear friend Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From Toe's silly....to Liz's sublime... a wonderful read from beginning...to end... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
There's nothin like a TOE laugh! Oh how I miss your humor! You back to play for a while?? Missed ya much!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Welcome back, stranger! You brought smiles and inspired a beauty from Elizabeth... (though now that I know why the tree is weeping, sitting under it isn't quite so inviting! LOL) Thanks for explaining the whys and the wherefores so well, Toe... Now couldja stick around? *G* |
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