Open Poetry #12 |
Petulant Petticoats Pout |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Petulant Petticoats Pout ~*Marge Tindal*~ Stub of toe from stubborn pose Petulant petticoats pout Cornered concern of tempers burn Time Out - Time Out - Time Out Keeping loyal mistress company With woeful - doleful eyes Ever the faithful companion Pooped-out puppy does sympathize Crocodile tear from peek-a-boo eye Never hits the floor Silly sniggle - Little giggle Silly little girl ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Really cute! Reminds me of a little one I know, except he would be hardheaded about staying in the corner! Love it Marge Hugs, Deb |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OK... I love it... Cute little puppy pout sitting in time out...LOL.. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Margie this is soo cute, just love it and the graphic just gorgeous Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ I hope it stirs the memory of many a mom. Nan~ Now you can see why it was so important to me to find the perfect picture ! I KNEW you'd like it ! Thanks for uploading the graphic for me. Tracie~ Doesn't it just kinda makes ya' want to go awwwwwwwww ? Yeah ... me too ! So tickled you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is beautiful, so really cute and delicious. And I love the graphic too. I really really do. You are so good at these love. You're soo good period.! Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this does indeed spark many a memory, only my little angel use to put her hands on her hips and give one of those "looks" .....Thank you for this, it brought many a smile to my face.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Crocodile tear from peek-a-boo eye Never hits the floor Silly sniggle - Little giggle Silly little girl Very cute, enjoyed the read. *L* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOOHHHHHHHH thats ME standing there...LOL...spent may an afternoon in a corner too stubborn to say Im sorry...wonderful |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Once again, Marge, wonderful. I absolutely adore this piece. I add this to my library, on the shelf next to your other "wonderfuls". I'd rather be known as a fool with a heart, than be known as a heartless fool. <slh> |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a sweet poem! I HAD to read it when I saw the title. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ I LOVE spreading a smile. Thank you for wearing one from this little piece. GreenEyes~ Oh, Oh ... I know that little independant pose too ! I'm just so tickled that others can identify with it. Thank you for letting me know. Seymour~ I would think that the dad in you would recognize this in a heartbeat .. Pops are such softies ! Thank you for reading, my friend. Paula~ LOL @ stubborn ! Who'da thunk it ??? Seraphin~ Thanks for making me feel good about this. I appreciate you. PoetdeVine~ This was inspired by a picture I've seen hanging in hospital corridors for years. (Not this exact photo - but close) It just demanded to be written. Really glad to know the title pulled you in. Thanks. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Loki New Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 4 |
That's absolutely adorable. Made me smile here at work and that's no mean task! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love your poem, hon! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nothing petti about you, Marge! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nothing petti about you, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Loki~ And knowing that you smiled - gave me one to wear. Thank you. Suthern~ Hugs, hon ! BIG ONES ! Balladeer~ Thank you, love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Marge, yet another great one . . . Reminded me of a faithful pup from my youth. Lovely Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HM3~ It's so good to see you in here. I revisited your homepage and was most impressed. Glad you enjoyed this little memory-shaker. Thank you for reading and responding. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes, the ever faithful corner companion...what a treasure we have in our Marge! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
He's standing guard, protecting her while she is in the corner......... I just love this poem and the picture is too sweet! -SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--the child in the graphic must have taken adorable lessons from you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thank you for such a gracious reply. SEA~ Isn't she just the sweetest little thing ? Thank you so much. Martie~ You send me such a smile, my dear. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge this is great!! One of my kids, if put in the corner, Made pictures with tears. The cat usually kept her company. I love it!!!Hugs, Mother E |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is absolutely adorable! It flows so well and has such a delightful childlike fervor to it, I just adore this piece. I can't believe that I almost missed it! What a perfect poem to go with that famous picture - you brings pictures to life with your words Take care, Marge The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MotherEarth~ I'm so glad you found a memory tucked in this little corner. Thank you for letting me know. Melissa~ Your response delights me. Thanks for the smile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is adorable, Marge!! So cute!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I thank you for your thoughts. I'm cleaning up some replies I missed and was pleased to see you didn't miss this one. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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