My Truth (concrete form) - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #12

My Truth (concrete form)

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-02-24 07:13 PM

co                   me
kiss
me                        back
into             your
eyes     and
taste my
trut
h

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-02-24 07:32 PM

ohhh nice *s..I like this very much

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-02-24 07:52 PM

Love it, nicely done.

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-24-2001).]

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

3 posted 2001-02-24 08:41 PM

Neat!

~*Peachy Be*~

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-02-24 09:38 PM

This is very cool!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-02-24 10:00 PM

I think this is really neat.......I love the style, and it's very emotional......

SEA

Wolf777
Junior Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 20

6 posted 2001-02-28 04:00 PM

it took some searching, but i knew i would find you. and i'm glad i did so i can tell you how talented you are. maybe someday you'll believe it.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-02-28 08:08 PM

excellent!!!!

you know how much I like these Snow. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.