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Circles Of Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Circles Of Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ * ~Love~ is the circle that never ends the waiting heart of a needy friend clasping hands holding on forever ~*~ Our sweet truest love is the continuous revolving everturning of circles in absolute juxtaposed relation to where we are and where we will always be together ~*~ Growing into each turn with grace, holding just the softest trace of love to bind us to this place - until evermore ~*~ Circles always bring me back to you you stand there waiting with a smile and a ~hug~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
well I've definately got a smile and hug from this one Marge Thanks Very nice  |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Hey, it's not often I get to be among the first to see one of your poems here! And one of the shapes you do so well, too. I like those circles and all the love held within them. But then, can't remember that I've ever not liked what you wrote. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A never ending circle of love, what could be better "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge love certainly is a circle that never ends, no matter how one looks at it. That wonderful feeling that imbues the very core of the heart always comes up love one way or another.....I love this one Marge! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is utterly truly wonderful, so fabulous that I'm truly stunned Really lovely, and the circles are wonderful Take care love as always Mushy  Did I tell you that I love this one? Because I do!! Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Your format suits your message well. And the message is all that counts. Well done. AT |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written... wonderful feel good poetry. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Circles always bring me back to you" Beautiful.. Poeminister |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Circles ... love ... hugs ... they all come back to you with this beautiful render. Lovely sentiments and composition Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Growing into each turn with grace, holding just the softest trace of love to bind us to this place - until evermore =================== this is so sincere and lovely Margie-girl what a sweet read  love and hugs right back atcha Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
The infinite circle of love...a beautiful piece filled with love and happiness....wonderful write! Nathan [This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Another treasure, Miss Marge. One can always depend upon your sincere words and your unique gift of presentation. Lovely writing, to be sure. Thanks for it. (o: Hope you are well, Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ Glad to know the smiles and hugs were received. Thanks. KCS~ Awww ! So sweet of you to say. Thank you. EagleOne~ You're such a doll ! ETHome~ Thank you, my friend. Marsha~ Funny thing - I started out to do something else, but the circles had a mind of their own. Thanks, sweetie. ATelamon~ Thank you for the reply. Nice to know you enjoyed it. Mike~ Now THAT'S a real compliment ! Keep up that 'feel-good' feeling ! PoeMinister~ Thanks for letting me know. Kit~ THe circled and caught me quite by surprise. Thanks, gal. JanetMarie~ Bounce back on you ! ! Nate, my friend~ Thanks so very much. Claire~ Always nice to know you've read and enjoyed. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So since it is a circle, does that mean we get to keep coming back for more and more no matter how many trips we make around the elipse? Wonderful write my friend and so true in it's words........now watch for me, I am coming around the curve just ahead.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Sweetheart such as you are can have seconds every day of the week and twice on Sundays ! ~*Marge*~ Psst-double up - it's Sunday ! ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh you are so right, wonderful warm circles of love you are realy a warmhearted soul. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Is this what you mean by the doubling up in the arms of someone like MARGE finding my way to the world of happiness and contentment in friendship with you [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Lovely marge, as always ~FKA Maria Byrne~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Glad always to *{{hug*}} you back. Kind of what I had in mind Hugs n' kisses are so sublime Wrap me with your love ~*Marge*~ Maria~ Thanks for the peek ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooooo lovely, Marge!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I just love reading your poetry, but to see it presented as beautifully as you always do, well, it's a extra special treat! SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your circle of love is always extending to those who want to learn a bit more to craft and you know who I mean... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this one lots, sweet hug lady... especially the promise of the last circle. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ *Hugging* you for your devotion to poetry ! ! SEA~ I will treasure your reply. Thank you. Karilea~ *Hugs* to you - Anytime, lady ... anytime. Suthern~ Yeah ... kinda special, isn't it ? You're a doll ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Circles of love are with you girl! You know how to light up a room! Love this! Hugs, deb |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Yeah, baby... I guess that why God stuck me with you... But it was a good choice, don't you think..? love, dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Yeah, baby... I guess that why God stuck me with you... But it was a good choice, don't you think..? love, dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, I have told my grandkids that I love them "O" this much and they used to get upset until I told them it was forever. I loved this and you do such good work!! HUGS, ME |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, Circles of love. What a beautiful concept, what a beautiful write! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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