Open Poetry #12 |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
2, 1, 0. I guess the earth likes Gary Numan. It was on Metal; the bed felt like a ball bearing on ice. Now I feel a pulse in my feet – every noise needs deciphering. Plane, man moving chair, tv on low, reporting. Let’s see if the earth like Cars. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 ... 87, 88, 89 (gulp) It likes the idea. Cabinets, rattling hinges. Sink needs to be emptied. Muffled underground bomb. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Honey, you know I love what you do, but.....I just don't get this one..........it sounds neat though -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting that you write this just as South America experiences an earthquake... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
SEA, it's about an earthquake (and its aftershock) that happened about 30 minutes ago. Sunshine, same thing for Southern California. Mike |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me, I saw earthquake; if I was blinded by what I saw, liked it without know what it meant...I mean, heck, I like the way it read! I was on 4th floor of hotel in Hollywood years ago when that 6.4 or so hit...saw then what I saw here. jwesley |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
jwesley, You got it right! I moved to California about half a decade after the Northridge quake, but I know which one you're talking about (heck, I live in Northridge now) Thanks for reading, and for liking my style. Mike |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ok, well now it makes sense now......... are you ok? ~SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Guess you guys were posting same time as me...only response there was SEA's. Know the feeling about the bed...was left hanging in air when it slid out from under me. Could see through a crack in the wall. Moved to a first floor place shorty after. Figured if it happend again...well if the ground opens that 's one thing, but didn't want an eight story building falling on me too. Hope you faired well...sounds like you did. They're a different sort of beast aren't they. My wife was born in Northridge! see ya...j. |
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