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To The One I Love
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To The One I Love |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
To The One I Love Yesterday, I suppose, I told you something you did not want to hear "I've met someone new." You congratulated me, but I could feel your pain Don't forget I am your soul mate always and forever There is nothing between she and I, we've only known each other two days I called you last night to ask you a question not about you and I, but you wouldn't speak to me. I think I know why. I heard you over the phone, you know The anger in your voice filled my heart with sadness and sorrow I am asking you if you read this, you know who you are, can we not be friends or at least talk? I have many things I want to say to you especially now but I cannot reach you Call me at work or send me an e-mail, you have no idea how much I miss you. I am hoping we can at least be friends and begin again. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is sad, Paris Girl, sometimes it's not possible to keep from hurting, keep writing.... "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes Laura, it's better to just let go. . .  . . . no matter how hard it is. . . heartfelt words. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Kathleen, Thank you for your encouragement. I will keep writing. John, I have finally let go. Thanks for replying. ~Laura~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
so sad.... look forward not back... ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, she cares enough to be a little bit envious of your new-found friendship... perhaps all is not lost..good luck!!  |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Please...don't encourage her! Ha! Sorry, Laura...I'm with Sven. No offense to your true love, just think it's time to move on. But then again, who am I to be giving advice. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
felt i should respond to this. i agree w/ sven and jlr...you need to let this go and move on with your life. the time has come for us to go our seperate directions. wishing you nothing but the best in life and love. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
This touched my heart deeply. Painful. And that, is never easy. I applaud you for writing it. Bare honesty is not always easy. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A brilliantly-written, sad write....I agree with the others about moving on but, if you truly love her then I say, take her back. Nathan |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Laura, sometimes we need to say goodbye, it might hurt, and it probably does, but we need to let go. Sometimes all we hurt by our actions is ourselves. And sometimes the pain goes too deep to bare, it can't begin to heal until we say this is the end and draw a line through that page of our lives. Not that I can offer any advice, except look within to find your answers, they are there. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Laura, i dont know whether i am unwittingly leading you on, asking you to have faith and keep hoping while the others advise you to move on with your life... am i giving the wrong advice, i wonder? well i always believe in this line and it has guided me through life thus far: hope for the best but be prepared for the worst take care |
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