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Even When the Sun is Gone
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Even When the Sun is Gone |
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Sunshine
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Even When the Sun is Gone somewhere, there are gray skies leaden down with rain but I know that the sun is around and it will peek out once again somewhere, there are clouds of white rushing through on high and a little bit of sunshine peeks down from the sky somewhere, buildings will cast shadows on the crowd below but a simple ray of sunshine lifts their spirits so somewhere, one is in a room replete with no windows, shades are drawn where one feels so incomplete their only hope, the coming dawn just know, even if the sun doesn't seem to be casting down its lighted beams the sun can still be there with you in what you think, in what you do if you are one, who lives without the sun for a day, or two, just know in your heart that words can act like beaming rays with good reading the shadows depart so find joy in your write, and all that you are find special ways to impart it, like shining stars Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"so find joy in your write, and all that you are find special ways to impart it, like shining stars" and you do sweet Karilea...you do! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You are all the Sunshine I need.........  this is great... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Like a Bee I love honey, And this is dripping with honey. *L* Sy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your words are Passion's sunshine, Karilea. Shine on...... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Some create shadows - you create sunshine ! Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
"somewhere, buildings will cast" "shadows on the crowds below" "but a simple ray of sunshine" "lifts their spirits so." Sunshine this was simply beautifully written. If buildings are casting shadows somewhere on the crowds below, if you are ever amongst them, they will have their ray of sunshine to lift their spirits and their hopes.:: Garfield |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
I thought your poem was beautifully written. the first few lines seems to remind me of something i'm struggling with right now. My heart is leaden down with rain and I know the sun is around the corner and will peek out once again. You write beautifully. keep it up |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
I thought your poem was beautifully written. the first few lines seems to remind me of something i'm struggling with right now. My heart is leaden down with rain and I know the sun is around the corner and will peek out once again. You write beautifully. keep it up |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Karilea~ this was pure sunshine in and of itself! beautiful, beautiful poem... wonderfully written with much love and gentleness. truly loved this! take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
shine on sunny one, Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OK my kidlets and friend poets....I'll be gone for a couple of days....write on without me, but know I'll be back soon to hug you all....everyone, behave, and if you can't behave...have fun! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sunshine, you offer hope in your poem, it's just beautiful.I always try to focus on the sun when cloudy days come, and it does work wonders.Sometimes nagativity sips through my poems,but at least I don't keep it inside. Thanks again, for you encouraging message. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart as long as I have a sister who shines as brightly as you do love I shall always have a treasure to spare. Thank you for this gift and the gift you give daily to Passions and to me. Take care love as always and enjoy your time off for golden behaviour Puck  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You always shine so brilliantly through these pages Karilea ... hugs to you for this sunny and inspirational poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Very uplifting and comforting thoughts here. Wonderful writing. I enjoyed this a lot. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it is indeed comforting to know that the sun will always be there. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Well done! a very enjoyable poem! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your words make my heart shine! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Just beautiful, Karilea, you are my ray of sunshine Very inspiring and well penned!~Take care, Melissa~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
How true! And today, I saw a little bit of the sun I have so desperatly missed...maybe I'll let it shine through in my words as you always do. Hurry back! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do you all know how wonderful it was to have been gone almost a full three days...and come home to find this little poem still on page 1? Thank you all....Sun is back....she was shining ALL day long in Kansas....and I have to admit....it was cloudy and gray when I left, fog and cover the entire weekend I was at seminar....but once let loose to come back to my poetry, the clouds lifted and the sun was warming the early, early growth of spring promises.... thank you ALL so very much for enjoying this little poem in my absence... and for your very, very special messages! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunshine, very nice... it was a ray of light to read. a bit of star light for my day, a single beam of happiness, and a wonderful warmth of Sunshine. Parker |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Parker, what a wonderful way to make me smile! Thank you! |
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