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SEA
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0 posted 2001-02-22 02:16 PM


We talked about our dreams
Things we wished for………..……….wanted
Whispered our needs…………… while holding hands
Looked into each other's eyes and smiled
Easy conversation with gentle touch
Outside the rain was a soft and rhythmic beat
Like that of our hearts
Music for our night
Slow………………steady
Constant
Romantic
Intimate


~SEA~


© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2001-02-22 02:19 PM


You pen of those special moments so wonderfully that I know you have to really appreciate them to do so and that makes me smile just knowing that not everyone has given up on finding true love. Very beautiful write my friend.
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2 posted 2001-02-22 02:29 PM


Mark~ that is so sweet of you......thank you for that....
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3 posted 2001-02-22 02:45 PM


Outside the rain was a soft and rhythmic beat
Like that of our hearts
Music for our night
Slow………………steady
Constant
Romantic
Intimate
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you forgot Inspiring
very very nice Sea-gator
and ya know I love the format and presentation...
and hey...the imagery and subject aint so hard on the eyes either *L*
why is better than Meatloaf for dinner LOL
great sweet write me girlie


Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else.
To find that inspiration, live that inner vision.
Love is my religion...I believe in you.
~T Kimmel

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-02-22 03:48 PM


Liked the way what was happening outside was a part of the mood inside...James
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5 posted 2001-02-22 03:58 PM


Circe love, this is utterly wonderful, a perfect intimate moment. Absolutely truly splendid. Really love this one as you know I would.
Really excellent writing from you love
Take care love as always
Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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6 posted 2001-02-22 04:21 PM


SEA~
*sighing* here ~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Dennis
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7 posted 2001-02-22 04:46 PM


I need more time here, more time!

just enough time to read the titles, that's all a man could ask for!

lovely poem here, SEA
gracias!!!

Dennis

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8 posted 2001-02-22 05:58 PM


Janet~ no meatloaf tonight.......
thank you, I'm glad you liked this

James~thank you sweetie

Mushy~ thank you sweet friend

Marge~ that's a good thing.........

Dennis~thanks.....glad you liked this!


~SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 02-22-2001).]

JLR
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9 posted 2001-02-22 07:43 PM


This is so sweet and I love the way you wrote it. I am one of those who writes about the loss of love more than the finding of it. But it wasn't that long ago...I wrote like this. Thanks for reminding me.
Bill Charles
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10 posted 2001-02-22 07:59 PM


SEA - to know these emotions is truly special. A most powerful writing, saying just about everything there is to say about being intimate.

BC

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11 posted 2001-02-22 10:12 PM


JLR~thanks.......I think you'd do romance very well.......
BC~ thank you

~SEA

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12 posted 2001-02-23 12:58 PM


Hi Sea,

I see your muse is as beautiful as ever, this sounds to lovely, something I miss!

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Poeminister
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13 posted 2001-02-23 01:23 PM


SEA--I dream of such moments..beautifully penned.

Poeminister

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14 posted 2001-02-23 01:25 PM


gonna echo mark on this...it sure is good to know love is still alive......nice writing
Parker
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15 posted 2001-02-23 01:41 PM


SEA, a very nice capture of a special moment. Lovely thoughts. smiling moments... nice write.

Parker

walker
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16 posted 2001-02-23 01:42 PM


As I read it, I can "feel" the love.
Well written!


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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17 posted 2001-02-23 02:24 PM


I agree with all above, very well written, with a lot of effect *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Deep in the heart
18 posted 2001-02-23 03:34 PM


WOW. You DO write so well.
Encore!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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19 posted 2001-02-23 04:05 PM


SEA, your poem speaks of something most natural, though often not achieved. I love how, in your poem, the rain brings music to the night. Thanks for it.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


SEA
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20 posted 2001-02-23 04:56 PM


Cerenity~ Aren't you sweet!! Thank you

PM~ I hope your dreams come true

Jellybeans~ very alive.......thank you

Parker~hey handsome, thank you, very nice of you to say that.....

Walker~ Then I did good, if I made you feel......thank you

Wynter~ thank you

Interloper~ You are so sweet.......I have one for you........

Meadowmuse~ thank you so much for the beautiful comments

~SEA


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21 posted 2001-02-23 08:00 PM


'Whispered our needs…………… while holding hands
Looked into each other's eyes and smiled'

Very loving write, SEA! What a wonderful feeling this is...

sp


everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Lone Wolf
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22 posted 2001-02-23 10:47 PM


SEA,

I love it when you write like this!! Lovely thoughts.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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23 posted 2001-02-26 05:03 PM


I like this very much, SEA... (wistful sighing) Well done!
jonmcm
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24 posted 2001-02-26 05:25 PM


Lovely Sea!

Cheers
Jon

Wilfred Yeats
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25 posted 2001-02-27 12:22 PM


may it henceforth always be so -
My wish for you-
lovely SEA

Red-uni
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26 posted 2001-02-27 12:40 PM


hi,
I did enjoy your poem very much. Moments like you wrote about are to be cherished.
Red

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