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| Open Poetry #12 |
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Intimate............... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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We talked about our dreams Things we wished for………..……….wanted Whispered our needs…………… while holding hands Looked into each other's eyes and smiled Easy conversation with gentle touch Outside the rain was a soft and rhythmic beat Like that of our hearts Music for our night Slow………………steady Constant Romantic Intimate ~SEA~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You pen of those special moments so wonderfully that I know you have to really appreciate them to do so and that makes me smile just knowing that not everyone has given up on finding true love. Very beautiful write my friend. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ that is so sweet of you......thank you for that....  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Outside the rain was a soft and rhythmic beat Like that of our hearts Music for our night Slow………………steady Constant Romantic Intimate =================== you forgot Inspiring  very very nice Sea-gator and ya know I love the format and presentation... and hey...the imagery and subject aint so hard on the eyes either *L* why is better than Meatloaf for dinner LOL great sweet write me girlie Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liked the way what was happening outside was a part of the mood inside...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, this is utterly wonderful, a perfect intimate moment. Absolutely truly splendid. Really love this one as you know I would. Really excellent writing from you love Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ *sighing* here ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
I need more time here, more time! just enough time to read the titles, that's all a man could ask for! lovely poem here, SEA gracias!!! Dennis |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ no meatloaf tonight....... thank you, I'm glad you liked this James~thank you sweetie Mushy~ thank you sweet friend Marge~ that's a good thing......... Dennis~thanks.....glad you liked this! ~SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 02-22-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This is so sweet and I love the way you wrote it. I am one of those who writes about the loss of love more than the finding of it. But it wasn't that long ago...I wrote like this. Thanks for reminding me. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - to know these emotions is truly special. A most powerful writing, saying just about everything there is to say about being intimate. BC |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JLR~thanks.......I think you'd do romance very well....... BC~ thank you ~SEA |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sea, I see your muse is as beautiful as ever, this sounds to lovely, something I miss! Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA--I dream of such moments..beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
gonna echo mark on this...it sure is good to know love is still alive......nice writing |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, a very nice capture of a special moment. Lovely thoughts. smiling moments... nice write. Parker |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
As I read it, I can "feel" the love. Well written! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with all above, very well written, with a lot of effect *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW. You DO write so well. Encore! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
SEA, your poem speaks of something most natural, though often not achieved. I love how, in your poem, the rain brings music to the night. Thanks for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cerenity~ Aren't you sweet!! Thank you PM~ I hope your dreams come true Jellybeans~ very alive.......thank you Parker~hey handsome, thank you, very nice of you to say that..... Walker~ Then I did good, if I made you feel......thank you Wynter~ thank you Interloper~ You are so sweet.......I have one for you........ Meadowmuse~ thank you so much for the beautiful comments ~SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Whispered our needs…………… while holding hands Looked into each other's eyes and smiled' Very loving write, SEA! What a wonderful feeling this is... sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, I love it when you write like this!! Lovely thoughts. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, SEA... (wistful sighing) Well done! |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Lovely Sea! Cheers Jon |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
may it henceforth always be so - My wish for you- lovely SEA |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
hi, I did enjoy your poem very much. Moments like you wrote about are to be cherished. Red |
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