Open Poetry #12 |
A poem for life |
Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
My heart beats because of you, that's why I want to say thank you I know I'm not considered part of the world yet, still you remember me Everything you eat I get some You're the reason for which I can breathe Six more months till you rock me, the world is big but I have you so I am lucky Patience isn't my strong suit Sorry for all the times I kicked you Without you I would be dead for you are the one who keeps me fed My blook is yours and yours is mine you'll be my mom for all time Wait, What's that light there's still six months to go somethings not right Mother I love you, now help me! What are they doing to me? Mom that hurts, fight for me No more air.. This isn't fair! I have a life to live Don't stop it now Mom I don't understand What have I done that was so bad? Sorry that i made you sick, the pain can't you feel it? I want to be like you when I am older, oh no, mom it's getting colder Don't worry mom I can make it. But mom can you take it? I want to cry I want to scream Why would anyone want to harm me? Mom I can no longer see. What's happening to me? Sorry mom I couldn't make it They didn't understand I love you though even if you can't hear me I know deep down you can feel me.. If abortion isn't murder, then what is??? |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Voiceless, this is a very moving and powerful piece.....i agree with you. Take Care, ~Laura~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, this broke my heart, but, sometimes important issues such as this needs to be put into words to make others see. Well expressed~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
A good way of showing one of the sides of a very controversial issue. Well done! "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, I like this poem and believe it or not you and I, share similar styles....were both different, we constantly write powerful poetry and we both can write form the perspective of something deep like your piece or like my piece where I rhymed from the perspective of a gun....a very good piece....man, maybe you and I should collaborate and join forces.....what cha think....peace! Nathan |
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