Open Poetry #12 |
Isolation Blue |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
On a desert dry and lonely where the rogue winds shift and change there's broken hearts that listen for love to call again but there' only echoes calling from a mountain filled with pain and far away there's an old love to blame. There's teachers and there's students and there's lessons learned for gain but gypsies with no mercy leave fallen hearts in chains and the chapters of defeat are written on memory lane and far away there's an old love to blame. Secret memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in a box made for shoes dreams inked on promise everlasting a river of words in isolation blue. There's a distant fire an old desire a deep eternal flame but the weeping winds keep blowing and the dead eyes hide the pain it's a sorry mind to gather and a hard thing to explain and far away there's an old love to blame. Secret memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in a box made for shoes dreams inked on promise everlasting a river of words in isolation blue. The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I believe that the walls of my life may have at certain times been painted this color. . . superb words my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are writing pure music, lovie....I heard every note,on a steel box too...beautiful! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I agree, there is always an old love we leave all the responsibility for our condition on sometimes, and I too, have that same box of tear stained letters even still. I enjoyed this so much. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Sven for your words much appreciated! Thank you Celeste I know you have the musical angle covered just like JM Thank ya Temptress you're right we all have those memories one way or another and it just hurts so!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes, I remember...an unrequited love...I thought it was "all" and "real" and little did I know...what I know today... Ethome, my friend....wow.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
On a desert dry and lonely where the rogue winds shift and change there's broken hearts that listen for love to call again but there' only echoes calling from a mountain filled with pain and far away there's an old love to blame. ====================== There's a distant fire an old desire a deep eternal flame but the weeping winds keep blowing and the dead eyes hide the pain it's a sorry mind to gather and a hard thing to explain and far away there's an old love to blame. Secret memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in a box made for shoes dreams inked on promise everlasting a river of words in isolation blue. =============== Ebabes..this is so awesome... what a soulful verse of singing the blues you have penned.. excellence if imagery and cadence and the emotions are written with the ache evident and the chorus/verse repeat ties it all up poetically perfectly. "There's a distant fire an old desire a deep eternal flame" way cool verse here..love the inner rhyme. very cool write...time to bring out the Mardi-gras girls to sing back up for ya on this baby and by the way .. love you new signature. Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
it is a flowing work wrapped up in a box of truth |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ehtome---I have sung the isolation blues...but never quite like you, my friend...you do it with such rhythm and soul...wish I could write like that! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Karilea for the read and I know what you mean...we all grow with experience.. and learn....take care! Hey poet pet...thanks so much ..I thank you for those comments on the blues and inner rhythum ....much appreciated.......you're VANtastic!! Thank you Voiceless for taking the time to read this I' glad you dropped in! Martie it's always so nice to hear from you and believe me the feelings mutual.... take care....ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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