The Pantomime ....................................... repost 20.7.99

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The Pantomime ....................................... repost 20.7.99

Sunshine

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0 posted 2001-02-20 02:46 PM

Come flow with me, come be my love true
come glow with me, we’ll start anew.
Slowly move your fingers along toward mine
and play with me this pantomime.

Use your eyes to caress my naked soul
and linger on in my artless heart
for I know it to be my virtuous goal
that never shall we part.

Use that prose that only you speak
and lift me high until I peak
and nay do not cast me downward sire,
but slowly drown in my desire.

With fingertips warm do softly play
and, listen wistful to what I say:
when your hands reach beyond my touch:
know that I love you, oh, so much.

Embrace me whole, enfold my all,
till love’s rapture doth me call
and I fall within your passion so deep:
as you sow, so shall you reap.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-02-20 04:04 PM

Sunshine,
I don't think I read this before. It's a lovely poem. Soft and sweet and very tender.
*L*

Dee
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2 posted 2001-02-20 04:08 PM

Sunshine, very nice. Sometimes love is like a pantomime, following the script so it all works out.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Sunshine

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3 posted 2001-02-20 04:27 PM

Sy, I was fairly new to Passions, and being made to feel very, very welcome....thank you for catching the repost...

Dee, very kind comments indeed, thank you!

ethome
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4 posted 2001-02-20 04:38 PM

You know Karilea...ya came here with lots of talent kid! This is an example of it!
"With fingertips warm do softly play
and, listen wistful to what I say
when your hands reach beyond my touch
know that I love you, oh, so much."

Yep that's the Sunshine I know....a poet through and through...no hope for anything else.....you're here forever, doing just what you like to do......take care!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Sunshine

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5 posted 2001-02-20 04:46 PM

LOl with Ethome..."no hope" is about right....thank you!

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-02-20 05:32 PM

*wow* karilea....thought that your sunbeams caused the heat....but it shines through your words....glad that I could read this one as I am very busy at the moment.

Take care
((hugs))
Charisma

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7 posted 2001-02-21 09:33 AM

Thank you Charisma...very much!

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