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What Does My Day Consist of?
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What Does My Day Consist of? |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 Smiles of you twirling about in my mind; The hours we walked along the shore. Visions of our fingers entwined... How you captured me with your charming allure! Lying beside you as you sang to me; Strumming each of my heart’s strings. And for those few hours I was free Of the grief my life relentlessly brings. Your beautifully iridescent eyes Staring their way into my soul; Looking for the answers to the whys And making me once again whole. Dreams of you when we’re apart; Chills running up and down my spine... You ignite all the shadows in my heart, All the jagged edges of my life refined. Every minute of every day consists Of all of these images of you, love... Nothing else in the world exists Except you, dancing into my life from above. everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very nice write! And I love the lighthouse!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris~ what is this doing wayyy down here people?? lol...loved this, truly did. wonderful writing as always from your pen. lighthouses are one my favorite themes to begin with but this...this is just lovely my friend!! take care amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
snowpants, you are standing in the sunshine with this lovely write Well Done! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'll have whatever YOU'RE having...well at least a reasonable facsimile...a lovely read, like a pause of meditation for me today...thank you! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love, what a beautiful thing to do all day long. Very nice. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* I wish that my day consisted of this. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
insect: thank you! I like it too!! Glad you enjoyed!! Aims: too sweet you are! thank you, m'friend, for your always-lovely replies!! -e ~~~~~ Kethry: why thank you! I appreciate your compliment!  serenity: nope...NOT sharin'...LOL...thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this! I certainly enjoyed writing it! walker: ahh, yes...a WONDERFUL thing to do all day...thank you, my friend!! glad you liked it!! Sven: yes, it is a lovely thing...glad you could stop by! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Snowpants-This was truely beautiful. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When you pour out your heart in love you really pour it out. Lovely images and such lovely thoughts that race through your mind. Each verse is so well constructed that they flow to the next smoothly and never lose the impact of the piece. Wonderful work my friend and of course you know that I am going to steal that graphic.LOL  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful, snowpants, just lovely, and I love lighthouses, so much! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Gemini: thank you so much! I am glad you liked it! Mark: wow...you are too kind, my friend!  It means a lot to hear you say such wonderful things about my writing, ya know, bein' the "teach" and all...gotta get a passin' grade, ya know! Thank you, my dear friend...I am glad you liked this one!!sp everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey, Kathleen, you sneaked in there on me! Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed this! sp everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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