Open Poetry #12 |
An occasional kiss |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Keep me by your side, I plea to you. I'll keep carrying, all your crosses. I'll lead you to our own glory. I'll steal you away from hell.I'll try to accomplish this, if you believe in me. I'll protect you, I'll be your only shield. I'll convince, to just give me an occasional kiss.I will not ask for your caresses.I will not ask for true love. Just to keep you closed to me, and forever have your touch. If one you walk away, just make sure that you return. I will not ask you where your been?, or to whom you gave my kiss?. Nor will I mention it ever. As long, as you give me an occasional kiss. |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Most interesting question of this is.. "to whom did you give my kiss" Very sad to think you only expect an occasional kiss when they should be so freely given with joy and love. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This may be the saddest thing you've ever written. (Here) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
walker, This is very bittersweet. I am betting you deserve more than an occasional kiss. Someone out there will reciprocate your love. Just have to find her. Good luck. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
So sad.. (but i like it) |
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