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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2001-01-13 01:53 PM

I Am Love

I remember the way you feel,
the way you smell,
the way you taste;
from moment to moment
I remember these things.
I am your spirit,
your heart,
the soul of your life;
in me you live
in ways you've never known.
Touching you
sets me tingling with desire,
the smell of your hair,
your skin,
the fragrance around you
enraptures my soul;
tasting your lips
is life itself.
I live for you,
of you,
in you;
Make of me,
a place to live,
to love,
to hide,
to cry and smile.
Be of me,
in me,
for me,
and I will ever be
an open door;
I am the spirit
of all you desire;
I am your dreams,
and all for which you live…
I am love.

w. james beard, jr.
© January 2001

...presumptuous maybe, but I tried...jimmy

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-01-13 01:57 PM

This is absolutely wonderful James! Beautiful sentiments and so well crafted, I really enjoyed this piece, nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

2 posted 2001-01-13 03:14 PM

I agree with Kit, this is indeed well-written and I agree with everything you say too...a wonderful write!

Nathan

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2001-01-13 03:21 PM

- Thanks you both, Kit and Nate, Love IS Wonderful, isn't it!

jwesley

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2001-01-13 03:22 PM

Presumptuous???????? Not in the least. Well done sir. You have penned a true beauty in this one and your words flowed smoothly from beginning to end. This is afterall what we all desire and you have said it well.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-01-13 03:39 PM

oh yeah.....I am reading LOVE....oh my...loved reading these smooth wonderful penned piece.

excellent done

((hugs))
Charisma

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-01-13 04:01 PM

Very nice...James

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2001-01-13 06:26 PM

jwesley, truely a wonder of a poem. Gotta love a love poem like this.

Parker

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-01-13 07:24 PM

Made my skin hum.......love this

-SEA

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

9 posted 2001-01-13 08:58 PM

...and I will ever be an open door...
When love is seen through an open door, the freedom remains, making the staying stronger and longer!! Great writing, and very enjoyable reading!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

10 posted 2001-01-13 09:34 PM

BEAUTIFUL...JUST BEAUTIFUL. I WOULD LOVE IT IF ANY GUY WOULD WRITE LIKE THAT FOR ME. I LOVED IT. GOOD JOB.

DYME

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2001-02-05 12:57 PM

JWesley, you poet romantic you, this is glowing.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2001-02-05 02:49 PM

James--Yes, I think you just might be..love, that is. Wonderful poem!

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

13 posted 2001-02-05 03:20 PM

Your talent shines in this one! I am adding it to my long list of favorites from you. You never fail in poetry, do you??

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

laryalee
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

14 posted 2001-02-05 05:13 PM

James, you have raised love to new and exalted heights - a marvellous view!
Lary

Suzanne Arlene
Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2001-02-05 05:53 PM

This was a joy to read . Very well done

Suzanne

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

16 posted 2001-02-05 05:57 PM

I agree.....this is breath taking...helen

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

17 posted 2001-02-05 07:34 PM

presump..yes, you are...but who could help but love it? keep it!

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