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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-01-13 01:13 PM

                              “When I’m With You”

                                     by
                                 Bill Charles



    I thought about the many times, we have been together,
            holding, touching, caring,
                    and speaking words of now, and forever…
    All these passions between us, I knew were so very sensual,
            and my being has never felt this way before,
                    so pleasingly acceptable…

    When I’m with you, I feel like I’m this special person,
            with a heart that smiles,
                    and my loneliness gone, and forgotten…
    I have stared into the depths, of your eyes so seductive,
            as trembling lips were touching slowly,
                    then becoming more admissive…

    Your softness that I explore, as we lie on our bed aglow,
            is something to experience,
                    never wanting to forgo…
    Happiness I sensed inside, as I heard all of your gentle sighs,
            with your smooth body caressing my chest,
                    warming, as it amplifies…

    Whispers from my soft lips, to one of such special elegance,
            who has taken this inner soul to keep,
                    but only with her acceptance…
    I finally know who I am, and I know you, I can’t argue,
            your charm to me, has been revealed,
                    during all of the days, and the gentle nights,
                           ‘When I’m With You’
                                ~~~~

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-01-13 01:31 PM

This is so tender and loving....I think it would be great in the newsletter if we can use it! Wonderful work!

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2001-01-13 04:00 PM

This is very lovely indeed, Bill - The poem is wonderfully sweet, and the graphic is stunning... Nice job, my friend...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-01-13 04:03 PM

This is fabulous Bill...James

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

4 posted 2001-01-13 05:26 PM

'Tis much beauty
in the heart of thee...
Thank you, for a treasure
to behold...

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

5 posted 2001-01-13 05:32 PM

BC~

this is beautiful and very romantic.....I really enjoyed this

-SEA

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

6 posted 2001-01-13 06:59 PM

Ahhh......BC......
This is so very beautiful and romantic, but I would never expect to find less from the heart of the Gypsy King.......write on, my friend!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2001-01-13 07:22 PM

Evening Elizabeth,

Thank you for your gracious reply. And yes, you may use it in the newsletter. I would like you to know that I am very honored by the request, and want to thank Passions for this consideration. Thank you Liz.

Evening Nan,

Thanks Nan for your reply, you are always so very kind. I also believe that the graphic is stunning, and I finally wrote one that went with it.

Evening James,

Nice to see you, and thanks for the kind reply.

Bill Charles
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Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2001-01-14 09:00 AM

Good morning my Lady Ollyne,

What a pretty name, for one so gracious with her words. I do appreciate the kindness, and wish you the best.

Good morning SEA,

Nice to see you, and thanks for coming by. And thank you for enjoying this writing, as it is very special to me.

Good morning Sunny,

Sunny, my very dear and gracious friend. Thank you for your kind words, and when I read your reply, it comes from that soft heart that you own. Thank you again.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2001-01-14 09:07 AM

All the good lines taken...will you accept a "lovely write"...?

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

10 posted 2001-01-14 11:13 AM

Bill, this was truly romantic. *sighs* I so much enjoy reading your words.

--------------
You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2001-01-14 11:18 AM

Put me down in the "YES" column Bill, along with all the other's. Well done my friend.

jwesley

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2001-01-14 04:07 PM

Hi Sunshine,

Yes Sunshine, I would accept "a lovely write", and I do thank you for the kind words.

Hello kitkat,

Thank you for coming by to read this writing, as it is a very special one to me. And I am honored when you say, "I so much enjoy reading your words". Thanks kitkat...

Hi jwesley,

You have been duly noted in the yes column, and I do thank you my friend, for replying to this writing. I appreciate it very much/

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

13 posted 2001-01-14 07:32 PM

Bill

Another splendid writing. The picture matches the writing perfectly. Your words are so warm and tender. #1 in my book too!

Ariana

Bill Charles
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Posts 10619
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14 posted 2001-01-14 08:47 PM

Evening Ariana,

Your words are very kind, and warm. I do thank you for them, as it means a lot to me when someone reads what I have written, and then it touches them.

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

15 posted 2001-01-15 11:23 PM

'When I’m with you, I feel like I’m this special person,
            with a heart that smiles,
                    and my loneliness gone, and forgotten…
    I have stared into the depths, of your eyes so seductive,
            as trembling lips were touching slowly,
                    then becoming more admissive…'

Absolutely gorgeous poem, Bill!  I truly love this!  Great work!

sp

I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

16 posted 2001-01-16 12:53 PM

Beautiful writing Charles...I really enjoyed this!!!

Nathan

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

17 posted 2001-01-16 10:39 PM

Evening snowpants,

I do apologize for not replying to your most warm comments. And I am glad that you liked this one, as it is special to me. Thanks again.

Evening Nate Dogg,

And to you kind sir, I also apologize for not getting back here a little sooner. Thank you for the gracious reply, and I'm glad that you enjoyed this writing.

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