Open Poetry #12 |
The doves |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The doves descended home. They found no place in here. With you no peace they found. In pain, they left you behind. No matter, how much you try, past times, they cannot lie. The wind just threw, the doves against the bitter shore. Where rocks just stood their ground, its edges claiming their souls. The doves descended home. They came and left in shame. Your spirit they tried to hide. But you kept it at guard. Avoiding their helping hand. The more they lift you up, the more you fight them off. The doves descended home now alone for them you hope. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Walker, I have read this a couple of times, but can't seem to get the whole meaning and I would love to understand what you are trying to convey in this piece, Love, Cerenity |
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