Open Poetry #12 |
In the Moonlight, Shadow Dancing.....repost challange |
Martie
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In the Moonlight, Shadow Dancing How these words appeal to me like the song that we heard playing that night so long ago. Dancing in the moonlight meet me after midnight, words that turned our eyes to glistening, hearts to planning a rendezvous. Oh, the romance of it took me trembling to anticipation of midnight shadow dancing, back yard lit and crickets singing, but midnight was to me a lifetime, I called him, so full of my desire that waiting was no option, at eleven o five on the dot I whispered now, not then. He was there in just a heart beat in this softly moonlit place behind the house, beyond the trees on grass that held the evening damp. Moonlight lit the loving arms that circled me and took me in to such a love that time still tells us of shadow dancing, in the moonlight of the backyard when we first loved at eleven o five. |
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Poet deVine
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So romantic!!! Sigh. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
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Dancing in the moonlight meet me after midnight, words that turned our eyes to glistening, hearts to planning a rendezvous. Oh, the romance of it took me trembling to anticipation of midnight shadow dancing, back yard lit and crickets singing, but midnight was to me a lifetime, I called him, so full of my desire that waiting was no option, at eleven o five on the dot I whispered now, not then. ============== ya know...there sure is a whole lotta mooning going on in here (haha) couldnt resist this is soooo sensual and full of that ache I love so... and its requited for a change ahhhh that back yard of yours ... tis paradise I tell ya beautiful Martie...I was so hoping you had one to repost As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh so good to see these wonderful pieces float back up to the present.... |
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Mike Member Elite
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A Martiesque jewel.... a truly beautiful poem my poetic friend. |
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