Open Poetry #12 |
Luv |
Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
LUV I was wandering lost and without direction and it was cold out there then I met you and I said "can you tell me the direction?" and you were laughing as always "I’m your direction" you said and it was sunshine in a green valley with blue flowers and you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderful! I met a guy who told me he had some direction for me... this likes me! |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
thanks very much Sunshine, I appreciate your comment, AP |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Beautiful! Yes, may the sunshine of love forever gleam upon both of you! This was very lovely! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely images indeed.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
thank you for your very nice comments Mistletoe Angel and Victoria, AP |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Isn't it interesting how every poem leads us to think of something in our own experiece? I remembered while reading this, when a man said "you are my destiny". It quite took my breath away at the time, though of course later, it turned out to be untrue. Anyway, so much for the personal reminiscence. This is a great poem. Sandra |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
just want to say thanks to you Sandra for your nice comment |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Saw and felt it my friend, nicely done. jwesley |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Your poem truly does convey that small but eternally important feeling that we all have felt and feel it time and again. It's short and great. I like a lot. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AgustP~ I saw a pleasant smile emanating from this piece. Wonderfully said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
thanks for your nice comments jwesley, CD and Marge, it means a lot to me, AP |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
AP.......i like this......& direction is everything isn't it? helen |
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