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Field Of Dreaming
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Field Of Dreaming |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Field of Dreaming Cascading brook flowing ever so gently Through fields of newly dressed blossoms Crisp sweeten air swirling to windy dance With sounds of singing spring hatchlings A field of dreams bearing glade tidings Mother earth setting stage for dreaming Welcoming those venturing her domain Offering precarious minds a pleasing palate Clearing troublesome thoughts away Refreshing the mind, attuning to her beauty No boundaries inhibiting your desires She inviting you to open heart wide Giving chance loving overtures mingling Basking in repertory of perfumed balsam Your task wander dream state without charge Stage set, what shall be your moving emotion Given the exchange of beauty and free’ness Shall your inquisitiveness move peacefully As did Mother Nature so freely in earthly stage Guided by natural heart felt desires reward abounds Nature in Her splendor no matter the season Stifles not imagination therefor no limits to time Human weightiness always aboard with claiming There lies opportunity to bask in undaunted mindset In fields dreaming of fragrant balsamic treasure Nature provides escape-offering life’s laden load relief If desire given chance to birth and heart so inclined By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
No boundaries inhibiting your desires She inviting you to open heart wide Giving chance loving overtures mingling Basking in repertory of perfumed balsam Your task wander dream state without charge Stage set, what shall be your moving emotion Given the exchange of beauty and free’ness Shall your inquisitiveness move peacefully As did Mother Nature so freely in earthly stage Guided by natural heart felt desires reward abounds Nature in Her splendor no matter the season Stifles not imagination therefor no limits to time Human weightiness always aboard with claiming There lies opportunity to bask in undaunted mindset In fields dreaming of fragrant balsamic treasure ----------------- ahhh Cerenity ... your name and gift for paintng natures beauty with your words are showcased here in this lovely inspirational piece of work. beautiful poetry ... words of natures wisdom very well done poetess take care jm As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I want to go walking in the mountains...with my sweetheart...and enjoy the beauty of each...James |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Janet, I am so pleased you liked it and its a wonderful compliment coming from you thank you very much. "Oh" James I want you to enjoy nature with your sweetheart too thank you so very much. Love, Cerenity |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I could never resist a poem or a painting of nature and you have given both in this piece of yours. Splendid visions and a very sincere love for the beauty of nature found in your words. Going in my library for sure to be enjoyed many times over. Wonderfully penned and not only was the imagery there but the cadence was super to say the least. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mark, Thank you for that loving reply and you gave me a new word (cadence) to now add in to one of my poems, thank you again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely imagery in this. Beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Indeed you bring the gift of nature and all her wonders to the reader. I'd love to go to a beautiful scenic place with you hon, and see it through your eyes as well as my own. To sum it up - beautiful... Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Poeminister, Thank you so much for you thoughtful reply, Hi Isis, Hay sweetie we can take this trip anytime you like, we both have hearts with so much desire we could go any were we wanted in this world I have faith in that, thank you for your loving words. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Cerenity!! Refreshing!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*if you write it. . . they will come. . . *  Sorry Cerenity, I couldn't resist!! This is wonderful. . . it's different for you. . . I like it!!!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Denise, Thank you so much for your kind reply, Hi Sven, I am so glad you liked it,im not quiet sure what you mean by different? I am trying to improve my work and right now trying to find a style or something/comfortableness. Love, Cerenity |
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