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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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"here look at this" she said holding the paper in front of me it was nothing complex really just a small doodle but, to me, incapable of doing anything with a pen and paper other than writing and origami it was a small masterpiece I envied the way that she could make the lines bend and wind into something other than squares and circles when I was lucky to be able to make a straight line I could see the way that she used shadows and light blending and shades to make a picture of something simple become something wonderful I began to hand her back the paper "keep it" she said and she smiled ---------------------------------------------------------------- [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like the view from this window.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sorry . . . this was a poem originally titled "in the window" but, the formatting wasn't working. . . so, I've changed it to "drawing". . . but I will try to fix it and show you what's "in the window" later. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Anxious to see what's in "the window". This was different, but pleasing to read Sven. Expresses simple amazment and awe! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well, the new poem is just as nice.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We all have gifts of one kind or another to share, don't we?....Enjoyed! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, It takes a beautiful heart to find all the wonder in such simplicity. Loved this... Love, Elise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Indeed everything is beautiful, it just takes someone with a special gift to see it. And you my friend are one who sees so much/.. Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sven, I like this, but now I'm just as curious as everyone else is about this window!  Sooo..FIX IT ALREADY! Oh, and I read A LOT into this than just what is written here.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Elizabeth, glad that you liked both of them. . . thanks. . . Irie, the window will come soon enough. . . but, yes, this is different for me. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, yes. . . we do. . . and it's wonderful to share them with others. . . thank you my friend. . . Elise, thank you. . . I've learned that there is wonder in everything. . . Isis, *sigh*. . . I'm not the only one my friend. . . there are others. . . thank you. . . Temptress, thank you. . . the window is on the way ok?? Oh, and there's nothing more here than my words. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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