Open Poetry #12 |
Moments |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What should I do with this moment, my respite from missing him? Because, for this moment he is here returned to me within a shadow. Gone within moments of my realization that he is not just my dream, and it's too late to live the completion of this moment because it's over and already a memory. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So many things are over before we even have the chance to experience them. Well done. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
The best things seem to happen much too fast.......... SEA |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, Moments of beauty lost in a memory, yes, but moments yet to come will grow out of those memories...Loved this. Love, Elise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
In the shadows of memories lie the recipes to a tastier future. Hold on to those moments and learn to soak up every new moment with all the elements you can. You can't slow them down sometimes but you sure can find ways to make them fill you up more. Wonderful write my friend. Now let's see you go cook something new up. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written... liked muchly. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
All we can do is relish the moments we're allowed, and live their precious memories over in our minds....nice write, here, Sandra!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you take the moment. . . and you hold it close. . . wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Catalinamoon, Ohhh I offer big hugs to you.. this sounds like exactly what I am feeling. And if you feel that way.. then I offer even more hugs. |
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