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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-01-13 08:42 AM

"WHAT I SEE"
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I can express no greater love
towards a gracious woman,
than writing in words
the way I see her,
in my eyes…

And my eyes will never see
anything more beautiful,
than when I take
just one look,
at you…
~~~~

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-01-13 08:53 AM

You keep writing like this, BCI.... You'll have a virtual line of ladies in waiting for just a glance in their direction..

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-01-13 09:08 AM

lovely bill..enjoyed your words very much

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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3 posted 2001-01-13 01:20 PM

Hi Nan,

I certainly thank you for the most gracious reply. Virtual line of ladies, eh? H'mmmmm, now wouldn't that be something.

Hello Victoria,

Thanks for the kind words, and glad that you enjoyed this one.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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4 posted 2001-01-13 01:48 PM

love these lines Bill...yeah I really do.

((hugs))
Charisma

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2001-01-13 02:04 PM

Very, very well done Bill.

jwesley

Kit McCallum

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Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-01-13 03:33 PM

Ahhh, the eyes say it all Bill, to be seen by a man with such sincerity makes a lady just sigh ... beautiful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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7 posted 2001-01-13 07:15 PM

Evening Charisma,

Thank you for your reply, and I'm glad that you like the lines. Thanks again.

Evening jwesley,

I wrote this with inner feelings, and I am glad that it came out the way it did. Thank you for your kind reply.

Evening Kit,

Yes, I do agree, the eyes do say it all. They are the pathway to the soul, and I believe that I have seen it. Thanks for stopping by, and for the most gracious reply.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

8 posted 2001-01-13 08:08 PM

Evenin' BC...
Now, of all the beautiful poetry you have written....this is my #1 favorite. It is simply magnificent, my good friend!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Bill Charles
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Posts 10619
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9 posted 2001-01-14 08:51 AM

Good morning Sunny from Alaska,

I am happy that you thought so highly of this one. I usually don't do free verse, but I have about eight of them that I have completed and will be posting them. And you my good friend, hope you're doing well.

Sunshine

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10 posted 2001-01-14 08:53 AM

and I see...a marvelous gift...thank you...

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2001-01-14 04:12 PM

Hi Sunshine,

I read your reply to this writing, and I want you to know that I was very touched by your words. I believe that I have read them correctly, and at the present time, I am feeling very humble. Thank you Sunshine, thank you very much.

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

12 posted 2001-01-14 07:28 PM

Bill

You have certainly made me swoon. Beautiful words. If someone said this to me, it would mean everything in the world to me. Thank you for sharing.

Ariana

Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

13 posted 2001-01-14 07:34 PM

Bill, funny how the simplest things can hit you straight in the heart. Wonderful write here....got me all weak in the knees!

~Becky~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2001-01-14 08:42 PM

Evening Ariana,

Thank you for the gracious reply about this writing. I'm glad that you liked it, and it is written for whoever reads it. Thanks again.

Evening Beckalini,

I never thought of it the way that you have mentioned, but you are correct. Simple things at times can touch ones heart. Thank you for your insight, and your kind words.

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