Open Poetry #12 |
Best Friends Like Forever Dude! |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
We've been here a short while But in the infinite scheme We've done it all, my friend We've been down the road The uphill battle Faced the fear of unknown worlds And swerved before the cattle There were times when I said The road is getting slight Upon the next fork that we see I think I'll take a right And when I miss my exit You smile and we keep going Nothing can e'er be kept from you Now that's a friendship growing [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
"And when I miss my exit you smile and we keep going" I loved that! So very true of life. Excellent! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And well it shouldn't be ...don't swerve too severely you might crash....but seriously this is a very good read ...well done Walt! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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lostinspace New Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 4 |
This is cool! Hey, my brothers name is Walt. Nice to meet ya. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this walt! There's a lesson in this one! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully written Walt! I loved the "exit" line as well, so much truth in that ... lucky is the person to have a friendship this dear, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
dreamer thanky to you ethome those durn bovine lost in space but is he way in or way out? (nice to meet yuh too) PDV thank you always a pleasure to hear your comments and to you my little Kit-a-dee thank you and it's time for my exit!! |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
"In modern algebraic form, Newton's law of gravitation is F = Gm1m2/r^2 where F is the gravitational attraction between two spherical bodies m1 and m2, whose centers are separated by a distance R. The symbol G is a constant, a number whose value is assumed not to vary with time and location in the universe; its value relates the size of the force to the sizes of the other quantities." -"nomatterhowhardyoutry,youcan'tstopusnow" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sorry had to reply to this... Cruz write me some poems!!!! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Hey Walt, as usual your poem it unreal! Isn't it great to have friends like that? Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sounds as though you have a friendship to be treasured. *S* I like this bunches, Walt! *S* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
YES, and friends are one reason I'm still here..the friends that keep ME going. I love this. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
my friend and I talk about the exit line all the time yuh i think its a classic like you lookin at me punk |
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