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Passion’s Garden
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Passion’s Garden |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 The garden gate is open, love, and there I wait for you… Within the walls, the roses climb, and all are kissed by dew… I’m waiting by a trickling stream, with sunlight dancing there… And songbirds high above are filling up the morning air… All around me, roses grow, and lilacs add their scent… Wild orchids bloom and never fade… For lover’s eyes, they’re meant… And as I wait on grassy knoll. I smell a fragrance sweet… It’s coming from the Scottish heather, blooming at my feet! The sun is high above, and dancing gently on my skin… As I lie in wait for you, I listen to the wind… It brings your voice back to my ear, I hear you call my name… Upon my heart, your sound will be forevermore ingrained… You’re standing at the garden gate… I’m waiting just inside… And now the hand of fate will choose, what love cannot decide… You step inside the open gate… within the trellis fence… My eyes meet yours, and deep inside, I know I’ve met my Prince… Our love has found this Passion Garden, where our hearts can go… And if we tend it faithfully, our love can surely grow… In Passion’s Garden, love can grow with nothing left to chance… The gate is always open… To the hearts that seek romance… Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
This was so sweet. Great read, thanks! ~Krissie "And I wanted you to turn away. You don't remember, but I do. You never even tried..." ~Fuel |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thanks Krissie! and yeah........this time of year the seed catalogues come out, I start thinking about my garden, and then who knows!!!!!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful piece, love the imagery and the heart of this. Beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful write! I love the images and I took them to heart...well done!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Such beauty. Your imagery is outstanding. I loved it! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Loved it. All the colors were right.It made the poem float as a feather. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Poeminister... Thank you so much.....I'm glad you stopped by to visit me in my garden!! ethome... Thank you for your always wonderful reply, and good to see you, too!! dreamkeeper... Ah, with your name, I would guess that you would enjoy these images! Thank you so much for your visit!! Walker... Yes......the color came from memories of gardens past and those yet to be!! Thank you, my friend!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is one of my favorites. And the picture is beautiful also. Did you paint that one? Love the way you used the gates and the garden as symbols, it worked perfectly. Sandra |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunny~  this is SO romantic.......just beautiful. SEA |
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